rap battles (extreme language warning in effect)

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Postby ryan » Fri Jun 27, 2003 10:00 am

how is it im both yalls female dog and im getting packed ewwwwwww hehe

this face looked like he just got packed hehe :shock:


both yall REALLY good rhymes :lol:
"To live is to die, it is my destiny" - seizure
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Postby ryan » Fri Jun 27, 2003 10:24 am

girl i aint dieing
im that nigga that flyin over ur bed while you crying
drop a bomb in your back door you lil whore
f*** wit me i make you into a smore
close the door ill beat you then eat you

my flows make you look like a lil hoe dreamer
thats all you can be is a dreamer
cause you'll never control this steamer
steam up to you face make you ugly and put you in disgrace
you aint got nothing on my pace
so just face it




not a very good one its too early in the morning
:x :x :x
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Postby RinRin » Fri Jun 27, 2003 12:06 pm

YOU GUYS ARE HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby ryan » Fri Jun 27, 2003 12:33 pm

thank you come on girls flow back
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Postby lilly!~~~ » Fri Jun 27, 2003 12:40 pm

lol that rap was pretty good fo r a white boy !! :) :wink: so i give (him) all the props there is to be givin 8) :lol:
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Postby Luc » Fri Jun 27, 2003 1:01 pm

lol
"The error of youth is to believe that intelligence is a substitute for experience, while the error of age is to believe experience is a substitute for intelligence." - Lyman Bryson
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Postby RinRin » Fri Jun 27, 2003 2:54 pm

A'ight i see what's goin on,
but you aint gonna throw me off,
cause i got the G bugga
waitin fo ya
gonna make ya scream
like a train goin, "chugga chugga"
gimme anotha one,
smack daddy, you aint gettin nutin done
cuz i got the rhythm goin on
like a systematic thug-a-thon (heh...don't ask)
i'm plantin the seed
ta make ya bleed bleed bleed,
gonna tramp you down
and stamp you out,
gonna rip ya vocal cords
till they spout
and you be shoutin out
you be lucky if you live it out
so go ahead
take a shot, yo!
i'm waitin fo ya
gunna make ya blow
up
like an explosion,
the engine's runnin
too fast, too bad,
you had it comin!

ha!! this is so fun!! hehe...
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Postby Luc » Fri Jun 27, 2003 5:38 pm

shut up, or i'll turn you around,
make that sweet white ass pink,
huh now that should make you think,
now get checked, before you end up wrecked,
i'll through you off your tracks,
make ya eat thumb tacks,
dont dance with me, luego no vives,
te mocho la lengua y leugo si me recives,
mija, im telling you now,
before you start screaming "ow",
back out, and dont pout,
this is all what its about,
pain


(its fun no ^.^)
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Postby RinRin » Fri Jun 27, 2003 9:10 pm

whoa there luc!! gettin violent on me!! hehe :P

well now, what we got here?
you aint dare playin that game
with me dear!
no fear, i'm lettin it all go
so ya know
i aint gonna let ya go
i'm the sniper
comin at ya
full force, no mercy
ya gotta bleed before me,
get down on yo dirty knees
and plead
cuz i betcha need
what i got here, yo!
jus gimme your name
and i'll play that game too
gotcha underneath my power
lastin more than a few hours
i see you cower
i'm steppin in
gettin in
intrepid
never gonna let you in
cuz i got the steam
ta make ya breathe
hot gasses in the masses
you gotta jus undertand me
cuz i'm gonna bleed you of all
your energy
showin no mercy
my fists are flirtin
w/your face
i'm takin you out w/a mace
right here and now in this place
you wanna piece of my pride?
come on, let's take it outside!

........

hehe.....none of it makes sense!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby xeverettx » Fri Jun 27, 2003 9:44 pm

aight im steppin in
these rhymes are just too thin
dont think your gunna win
ill tear you apart limb from limb
and ill do it again.
you say you got no fear
well listen here.
I am your fear my dear
so back down and dont make a sound
or these eyes will burn right through your skin
eat away at you until your an inch thin.
ill bury you 6 feet under the ground
1 foot for every nail in your coffin.
I aint bluffin.
ill create your tomb and lay it by your side.
stripped away of all your pride.
ill make you my bride
and bury you to hell
until i ring your final bell.


i know this was weak but it was my first time.
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