rap battles (extreme language warning in effect)

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rap battles (extreme language warning in effect)

Postby ryan » Wed Jun 25, 2003 10:40 am

i had a idea last night how bout a forum where we just have some rap battles so i'll start:



a rap i jus came up wit
bullet proof vest
you think is the best
not these bullets
kamakazie come try to dodge me
come on bring your dogs on me
it aint gunna help you none all u gunna do is run
run from me my bullets find you,blind you
O look out behind you
one in the back of your head
all your boys crowded around u dead
look at all the blood shead
one bullet in your head knocked you out dead


^^that is also my new peom on dreamers but hey
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Postby Luc » Wed Jun 25, 2003 3:50 pm

Rap: the vocal parts of a hip hop song. usually there are letters that rhyme with in a "sentence" or more then two letters rhyming in a couplet.


Rap: freeflowing poetry. just saying poetic thoughts and/of/or feelings as they come to you. sometimes making sence sometimes not. often even considered to be the same thing as a prose.

so .. ryan which one are you talking about? or we doing which ever.. ??



[note: not actual definitions. just a combination of different personal difenitions by countless poets and artist]
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Postby ryan » Wed Jun 25, 2003 9:15 pm

dont really madder just make a come back
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Postby Luc » Wed Jun 25, 2003 9:31 pm

funny how you think im dead, my little friend,
im just a ghost that cant be killed,
fully equiped and oh so well skilled.
lifting you up and tearing you apart,
switchblade stained all over your heart.
no point to all this, it aint worth my time,
look at your fearless lies, your shaking behind,
those tiny child eyes.
now bend over female dog your mine.



lol dont pay to much attention to it.. i just did what ever.. like you said make a "come back" quiet fun i have to admit.
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Postby ryan » Thu Jun 26, 2003 8:58 pm

funny where'd this female dog come from hunny
you looking like a lil bunny
dont pull something funny
i might just have to tear you apart
right at the heart
take it out eat it, beat it
come on hoe get ur lil bro
he aint got nothing on my flow
you dont even know
i will seperate you
make it worth your time
female dog your mine



*remember nothing said in these is personal and ment to be taken back, and anyone else that has something feel free to join in*
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Postby Luc » Thu Jun 26, 2003 10:25 pm

hahaha
yo back your self up,
or shut the f*** up,
what you think you got all this down?
poop.. i'll make you kiss the ground.
get on your hands and knees,
beg to me, woreship me,
im your jesus here,
your fallen christ, dont fear.
i'll go easy on you, i'll show you mercy,
ease up im just smiling you for money,
now hunny, suger pie,
hunny bunch, your bout to die,
so give up....



(how can anyone take this personal? this is too funny.. )
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Postby ryan » Thu Jun 26, 2003 11:30 pm

ha you jesus and im my aunt weezes
you betta belive this
you f*** wit this ill poke you in the eye till u die
turn you into a lil fly
splater your mind wit my rhymes
wouldnt gve u a dime to suck my poop
or f*** my poop
female dog ill go down in history
for being the first white nigga
to put u in ur place
and nut in your face



hehe :lol: :wink:
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Postby Seizure » Fri Jun 27, 2003 1:08 am

:shock:

You guys should start a group. You both got flowing skills.
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
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Postby Dreamer » Fri Jun 27, 2003 7:32 am

Oh you think yo both big and bad
tryin to tell me you want me had
nail me, pin me, shake my thang
call me female dog, but I got your tang

so talk your crap, and call it rap
and boy I gotcha word
you ain't all that, been there and back
this girl goes chauffered

so back your self up
and bend it over
cause I got somethin for you
I'll wack it, pack it
but still you'll lack it
an honey your money won't do

You just ain't got, what I want
and here's my messge for you
find it, dine it and get behind it
cause baba boy, This Dreamer is true


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Postby Luc » Fri Jun 27, 2003 9:03 am

lol good one dreamer :lol:


piff.. look at this female dog,
she thinks she gots her poop,
girl i best warn you move away,
before my words or
his funny looking face blow you away,
and that'll be the day, cuz im telling you what i;ll say,
with my hollow point bullets up in effect,
better get, and get that head checked,
cuz im wondering, pondering,
if your still gonna be fighting,
buti doubt it, cuz just like this f*** here, you'll just be dieng..
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