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Postby Martin Vann » Wed Sep 03, 2003 9:05 am

I have to agree with Seiz, running my own business takes up most of time leaving very little left to follow up on all the e-mails and trying to be a competitor in a contest which I have enjoyed. Too bad we have so many responsibilities that we often have little time for ourselves or each other.

Regards to all my poetic friends.

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Postby Everett&Brenda » Fri Sep 05, 2003 8:03 am

yeah i will wirte to this topic. or at least i will try! (Brenda)
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Postby Everett&Brenda » Fri Sep 05, 2003 11:44 pm

Tricks

evidence of matter
mysticly appers
white substance
that is all too clear.
i see it standing before me
looking strait into my eyes
i try to look back
but there is nothing but white.
could it just be my imagantion
or was it really what i saw
a scary white face
such as a porslen doll.
i thought my eyes were playing tricks
my mind was going crazy
i really saw a ghost
i must have seen a ghost
what else could it be
but when i really looked closely
it was only the wall!!!!
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Postby Visionary » Sat Sep 06, 2003 9:30 pm

Signed on the dotted line
don't know what's foreward
just whats behind

Scared of the unknown
not knowing what to do
scared of being away
being away from YOU!

Im leaving everything
for a period of time
something I have to do
before I unwind

just for no regrets
when I get old
no shoulda, coulda, woulda's
just being bold

Im scared more than I have ever been
out on my own
no one to rely on
no phone calls home

Thoughts of home race through my mind
Im not leaving for good
not leaving them behind

Just leaving for a little while
just wanting some peace of mind

I will be back and stronger than before
when you see me in my dress blues
walking through the front door!
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Postby Visionary » Sat Sep 06, 2003 9:33 pm

Sorry its not mystical....it was scary for me though....thanks!....Visionary
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Postby bench » Sun Sep 07, 2003 2:51 am

I know it is a day early but it is Sunday here already from where I am so let me make my announcement. I will give this round to Rinrin! It si quite dissapointing that there were only a few people who have submitted. For those who did submit, many thanks. :)
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Postby RinRin » Sun Sep 07, 2003 10:18 am

oh cool! (i'm surprised Dreamer didn't win....i really liked hers...) i guess it's time to make another topic...if no one submits...I guess I'll just wait until someone does! I mean, someone's bound to right? (hoping...)

:D

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Postby Luc » Sun Sep 07, 2003 12:08 pm

i would post a poem (or two) but dunno.. no time? writer's block? dont feel like it? many things effect my not posting.. but hmm.. perhaps i'll twist my arm and make myself post a poem for the next one? o.O
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Postby Everett&Brenda » Sun Sep 07, 2003 4:12 pm

i will sumit a poem..... just got to know the topic.

and congrats Rin Rin....!!!!!!!!
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