WEEK 16

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WEEK 16

Postby Visionary » Sun Sep 28, 2003 10:31 am

This should be one that everybody can relate to and have something to write about....This weeks topic is ....REGRET. It was either this or write about a one eyed, one horn, giant purple people eater? I think the first is better...lol. Have a great week!
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Tue Sep 30, 2003 11:43 am

I REGRET

I regret
that i didn't say i love you
I regret
that i really didnt care
I regret
that i never really payed attention
I regret
that i wasn't really there
I regret
everything i have ever done wrong
because your not there.
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Postby bench » Tue Sep 30, 2003 7:55 pm

despair

he was sitting there alone
in the darkest part of the room
staring into empty space
searching the monochromatic walls
for answers to unasked questions

his lovely face showing anguish
the pain of fettered years
etched in those lonely eyes
darkened by secrets and lies
in search of freedom

death crosses his mind
yet he'll sleep on it for now...
Live Life, Love Life
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Fri Oct 03, 2003 3:56 pm

nice poem bench! i really enjoyed reading it.
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Postby Visionary » Sat Oct 04, 2003 6:39 pm

Well......what happened?...did Bench and Brenda Michelle pay off everyone so they wouldn't enter?.........Bench....Congrats! YOUR THE WINNER! Hopefully more people enter this coming week for you....everyone must have writers block? Brenda Michelle your poem was exceptional also! Have a great week.
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Postby Seizure » Sun Oct 05, 2003 5:42 pm

I think the contest just dropped off... sadly people's interest seems to be elsewhere... I think perhaps we should suggest Bench hold it for a couple weeks or so before dropping the next topic.. or we start letting them run two weeks as opposed to one. Just a thought... probably not a good one.

I would have entered this week but I just have too many things going on at the moment. So the best I could do was those three new poems I submitted the other day... I can hardly keep up with the new poems on this site... much less write new ones of my own :?
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Mon Oct 06, 2003 7:33 am

thanks visionary and seziure that is a great idea it seems to be the only way so people have time to put one on here.
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Postby bench » Mon Oct 06, 2003 9:17 pm

Thanks visionary and brenda. Okay, I'll take seizure's suggestion and give 2 weeks for everyone to rest. See you guys here in 2 weeks time!
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Sat Nov 08, 2003 12:56 pm

OK SO WHAT HAPPEND TO THE POEM THINGYS, WERE IS BENCH?
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Postby Dreamer » Sun Nov 09, 2003 3:26 am

really.. now when I have time to play no one is playing... Just my luck

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