Week 18

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Postby bench » Fri Feb 20, 2004 4:27 am

he died in a car accident. he was driving alone. he was 100 meters away from his house when he hit a big tree along the road.
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Postby LinzAy » Sun Feb 22, 2004 3:58 pm

http://dreamersreality.com/Poems/others ... silver.php

Thats the link to Silver. A poem about my grandmothers nails........the poem explains......:)

even tho the thing is over i just feel so left out not being able to be here at all!! i miss you guys!!
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Postby Hopefull » Sun Feb 22, 2004 9:02 pm

I wrote this back in October 03 after looking at a widow looking at her husbands coffin, how would they feel? what was going through her mind? If I could have taken away the pain of sorrow, I would have. But I wrote these words



Today I looked into your eyes,
I see in you the day we met,
Your face so young, hair so black,
You dressed so smart to capture my heart,
I remember when,
You carried me from the church,
To our new home together,
A family we raised, Children we praised,
Now all grown, and left the nest
For them this is best,
Our busy life’s then slowed down,
Time for one another again to have,
Walks in the park, even eating out,
I look into your eyes I see all this,
I see our love that held so true,
I see our past so clear, happy days once had,
We held hands, Sad we never were,
Today I’m alone again, You left for above
I see you looking at me,
Tell me what you see?

I have written two others, but this one I think had more feeling to it
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Wed Mar 03, 2004 5:11 pm

That is a good poem Hopeful......
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