A NEW WEEK 20

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A NEW WEEK 20

Postby LinzAy » Tue Apr 06, 2004 8:48 am

Well....seeing as how my old week 20 got no poetry I'll do a new one:)

TORTURE

Can't wait to read everyone's talent and thoughts on torture......I've been going through quite a bit of torture lately........
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Postby Meridian Zuriel » Tue Apr 06, 2004 11:04 am

Hey LinzAy! Even though you haven't had 10. 5, or even 2 replies, you have one from me!!! I love writing poetry!!!
So, this week is torture huh? I need to think hard on that note...lol!!

Once I come up with something, I'll post it LinzAy!!

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HAVE FUN!! :D
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Postby LinzAy » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:37 am

LOL...I know i had one from ya....but it was more a respsonse than a poem....it wasn't overlooked!!!!!!!!!!!
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Postby Meridian Zuriel » Wed Apr 07, 2004 12:20 pm

Torture

I'm inflicted with pain
Can someone please solve my mental strain
I'm in bondage
Set me free
I've been handcuffed;
From my hands to my feet
I can't take it
I think I'm going insane
The blood drips on the carpet from the open cut
That they formed on my face
I'm being punished
For a crime I didn't commit
I'm being tortured
Even though I'm innocent
They don't believe me
That's why they continue to beat me,
Slap me, kick me, punch me
Throwing me against the wall
Like I'm some kind of rag doll

I'm inflicted with pain
Can someone please solve my mental strain..........




Have fun LinzAy!
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Postby Meridian Zuriel » Wed Apr 07, 2004 7:13 pm

:D :) :( :o :shock: :? 8) :lol: :x :P :oops: :cry: :evil: :twisted: :roll: :wink: :!: :?: :idea: :arrow: :| :mrgreen:

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Postby Hopefull » Fri Apr 09, 2004 4:16 am

As I see you walking the mile alone,
I remember the times we’d walk together,
You’re hand would touch mine,
Was it ever ment for us to be?
We grew with every smile,
We grew with laughter; sadness too,
Talk’s that would last for hours,
Now it’s Torture knowing,
I’m not apart of us together,
My heart beats no longer in tune,
My mind thinks about days once were,
I move on day by day,
Only to slide into once upon with you,
I know there’s another,
For you I’m pleased,
My heart is still as my mind is in torture
Always smile, kiss and make up before the sun sets, tomorrow is another day and life is to short
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Postby Hopefull » Fri Apr 09, 2004 4:20 am

The feeling of a lost love,
The feeling that happiness has gone,
The feeling "does love exsist"?

Remains for a while....

............ Finding words that go,
............. finding a place to flow
.................is not always easy
.................. Just "Be All You Can Be"
........................ From Me
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Postby Dreamer » Sat Apr 10, 2004 11:28 am

Waiting drives me crazy
Like torture to my soul
everything on hold
till time takes its toll

anger tantrums drive me crazy
like torture to my mind
I hide in my computer or bedroom
untill peace I find

Migrains drive me crazy
like torture to my head
pain goes on for hours
another day of it I dread

The mirror drives me crazy
like torture to my eyes
I am not the reflection I see
I look away and wonder why
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Sun Apr 11, 2004 10:17 am

Hate

I really hate you right now
stop telling me what to do
stop hitting me
stop treating me like a fool!
Guess what I'm doing right now
I'm cring in the corner
I'm scared poop less of you
watching you come closer.
I'm tring to move away
tring not to fall
but you grab me by the hair
and start pounding my head on the wall.
Your little sister is cring
telling you to stop
but you won't listen to her
even though she said she'll call the cops.
You pull out a knife
and start moving it around
you stab me in the arm
making sure it goes all the way down.
Then you throw me on the floor
and moving toward my neck if your knife
you tell me i'm a piece of trash
and you would help me end my life.
I have blank thoughts going through my head
confusion all around
I took my last breath
and your voice was the last sound.
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Postby LinzAy » Fri Apr 16, 2004 10:47 am

As I really enjoyed each poem I hate narrowing it down to uno! lol.
But I chose Becky as our winner for this week!! The last stanza really got muh.
Great job everyone!!! Await my mixture of these poems with patience please :D
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