Week 24

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Week 24

Postby Seizure » Tue Jul 13, 2004 11:21 pm

This topic is about things that have led you to believe you were disrespected.

Anything goes.
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Postby LinzAy » Wed Jul 14, 2004 4:15 pm

Disrespect

She moved in right behind my back
Planning and perfecting her attack
My eyes were open not wide enough
Couldn't see family love was a bluff
She knew how I felt, she knew of heart
She knew everything and still tore me apart
I've moved on from that, forgive but don't forget
The pain made me stronger for the next backstabbing I met

She felt the for revenge, he had wanted me not her
So years later she tried to tear apart something new I had together
Disrespected me in front of everyone we both knew
Disrespected my heart that for her friendship grew true
I've moved on from that, and she didn't tear us apart
Everything for him just grew strangely stronger and more dear for him in my heart

He, the one I now love, there should be no feelings of disrespect
But there are from before that he's said he regrets
There's been tears and pain
There's been sunlight only hiding behind the rain
But now it's all a diamond rose
Even through pain and disrespect this is what fate chose

I've been direspected by those I love and those I don't
Forgiveness fell upon most, still there are some where it won't
I'm sure I've given disrespect to one without intention
And done some pretty hurtful things that some would rather not mention
Disrespect is the everlasting fad, everyones disrespects another
It's a shame, since we're all suppose to be sister and brother

I have no idea where any of this poem came from, considering it's not my usual style and the last verse went in a very random direction...lol....o! and isn't the title just so original!
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Postby xeverettx » Wed Jul 14, 2004 11:17 pm

Disrespect Is My Middle Name


She assured me with a fake smile
I was knee deep in denial
Insincere words make perfect sense
My ignorance was sealed with a kiss

Kill my pride with lie after lie
I'm running out of reasons to ask why
Don't forget to take my dignity when you leave
Your just making it harder for me to breathe

Disrespect is an understatement
When my heart is thrown to the pavement
Was there ever any doubt
That eventually the truth would slip out?

Her simplicity got the best of me
"I guess it wasn't meant to be"
She assured me everything was going well
I assured her she was going to hell
"I've Broken Both My Legs Falling For You..."
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Postby Stacey » Thu Jul 15, 2004 11:41 am

MASQUERADE AT MY EXPENSE

How sweet you were
when you'd call
How sweet you were
I fell for it all

You always seemed
to be short some cash
I went to work
I busted my ass

When you were sick
I babied you
Stupid me
I had no clue

Deceptive words
escape your lips
So many lies
I HATE this poop
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Postby LinzAy » Fri Jul 16, 2004 12:46 am

oo nice poems u 2!
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Postby Seizure » Fri Jul 16, 2004 10:49 pm

So far so good, only 3 people want to enter this week?
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Postby Seizure » Tue Jul 20, 2004 3:38 am

topic is over Wednesday (that would be a week)
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Postby Seizure » Thu Jul 22, 2004 9:25 am

They were all good, but I think xeverettx's stood out the most... so that's my choice.

Again, good job.
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Postby LinzAy » Thu Jul 22, 2004 2:00 pm

yayness ev!!
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Postby Stacey » Fri Jul 23, 2004 3:17 am

great job ev ! :D
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