I need to read a good peom-unlike mine.

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I need to read a good peom-unlike mine.

Postby watchmefall » Tue Aug 10, 2004 12:28 pm

All of the world died in me
Never a thing to experience in the life inside of me.
Empty by the thoughtof broken dreams.
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Postby Meridian Zuriel » Wed Aug 11, 2004 11:55 am

Hey watchmefall! 8) Welcome to the forum! How's life treatin ya? I'm Meridian! Crazy as ever! I just came up with something real quick, it doesn't make that much sense to me though! I tried! :cry: Haahahhahha! Nice poem of yours! Good job!
Take care now!
Smiles,
Meri :D

Like a log, I’m drifting on the sea
I’m all mangled up, can you repair me
Like a scarecrow, my body is everywhere
My legs are over here, my arms are over there

I’m floating in my own blood
On this vast body of water
I'm in a million pieces
And I still can't belive, I'm alive to see this

It's crimson and gory out here
Is there any help in the hemisphere?
I'm slowly drifting away
Battered, torn and in dismay

Like a mirror, I've been shattered
All my body parts have scattered
I feel like a jigsaw puzzle
Reconnect me, construct me
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Postby IcicleTears » Wed Aug 25, 2004 7:18 am

I've found that the best poems I have read so far are written by Dreamer, Leah06, Seizure, and Rubydragons, I recommend reading some of their work. But if I am honest they are the only ones I have read so far.

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Postby Seizure » Thu Aug 26, 2004 2:27 pm

i was mentioned there... how unexpected with how infrequently i submit anymore.

Thanks IcicleTears.
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
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Postby LinzAy » Fri Aug 27, 2004 1:45 pm

of course, Seiz, if people are listing off suggestions of great poetry Id always bet on seeing you're name in that list :)
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