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Postby Brenda Michelle » Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:21 pm

okay well i have thought about it. i think i will choose "distant love"
good luck everyone and have fun
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Postby Visionary » Sun Sep 26, 2004 9:43 pm

There is some love you just can't find
There is some love you just cant hide
there is some love that finds you
there is some love you just can't elude

What ever the case may be
Love is something we all need
No matter if you want it or not
sometimes it's cold..sometimes it's hot

The love for me thats hardest to deal
Is the distant love that I feel
Covered over for many years
One day surfaces and appears

Something locked so deep inside
Found the key and has arrived
Now all the emotion presents itself as tears
And gone with it's rebirth are my fears

A new day dawns with a freshness in the air
This distant love I felt nolonger says BEWARE
I face each challange with her by my side
No longer a distant love..fore now shes my bride
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Mon Sep 27, 2004 1:56 pm

that is a great poem visonary... thanks for entering.
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Postby LinzAy » Mon Sep 27, 2004 8:32 pm

TEMPORARY DISTANCE

I never knew a distant love, then there was you
I never knew missing someone, then there was you

And after a few months you were distant, so many miles away
We were apart, with me so afraid you'd stray

But even with me so distant, your love and faith stayed strong
Knowing you could hold me in your arms before long

I always heard distance never worked, i was so afraid it wouldn't for me
But you're back here with me in my arms, where you're meant to be
~The Greatest Thing You'll Ever Learn Is Just To Love And Be Loved In Return~
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:03 pm

ohh i love your poem too linzay.
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Postby Stacey » Wed Sep 29, 2004 3:48 pm

FROM A DISTANCE


If only i could
spend one night
laying in bed
talking with you
I'd paint the sky
with your sweet words

If only i could
see the moonlight dance
across your face
I'd whisper things
you've never heard

If only I could
touch your face
and be the one
to kiss your tears
away

I'd watch the sunrise
in your eyes
as night fades into
day

If only I could
hold your hand
and walk with you
stop and taste your kiss

I'd watch the snow fall
in your hair
moment
of true bliss
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Mon Oct 04, 2004 9:08 pm

okay i have made my choice and congrates Stacy. i also loved visionary's and linzays very much. thanks for participating.
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Postby LinzAy » Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:48 pm

wow...congrats stacey....that was a beautiful poem!! very very beautiful
~The Greatest Thing You'll Ever Learn Is Just To Love And Be Loved In Return~
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Postby Stacey » Wed Oct 06, 2004 5:40 pm

Thanks :)
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