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WeEk 28

PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 6:21 pm
by Brenda Michelle
okay well i have thought about it. i think i will choose "distant love"
good luck everyone and have fun

PostPosted: Sun Sep 26, 2004 9:43 pm
by Visionary
There is some love you just can't find
There is some love you just cant hide
there is some love that finds you
there is some love you just can't elude

What ever the case may be
Love is something we all need
No matter if you want it or not
sometimes it's cold..sometimes it's hot

The love for me thats hardest to deal
Is the distant love that I feel
Covered over for many years
One day surfaces and appears

Something locked so deep inside
Found the key and has arrived
Now all the emotion presents itself as tears
And gone with it's rebirth are my fears

A new day dawns with a freshness in the air
This distant love I felt nolonger says BEWARE
I face each challange with her by my side
No longer a distant love..fore now shes my bride

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 1:56 pm
by Brenda Michelle
that is a great poem visonary... thanks for entering.

PostPosted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 8:32 pm
by LinzAy
TEMPORARY DISTANCE

I never knew a distant love, then there was you
I never knew missing someone, then there was you

And after a few months you were distant, so many miles away
We were apart, with me so afraid you'd stray

But even with me so distant, your love and faith stayed strong
Knowing you could hold me in your arms before long

I always heard distance never worked, i was so afraid it wouldn't for me
But you're back here with me in my arms, where you're meant to be

PostPosted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:03 pm
by Brenda Michelle
ohh i love your poem too linzay.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 29, 2004 3:48 pm
by Stacey
FROM A DISTANCE


If only i could
spend one night
laying in bed
talking with you
I'd paint the sky
with your sweet words

If only i could
see the moonlight dance
across your face
I'd whisper things
you've never heard

If only I could
touch your face
and be the one
to kiss your tears
away

I'd watch the sunrise
in your eyes
as night fades into
day

If only I could
hold your hand
and walk with you
stop and taste your kiss

I'd watch the snow fall
in your hair
moment
of true bliss

PostPosted: Mon Oct 04, 2004 9:08 pm
by Brenda Michelle
okay i have made my choice and congrates Stacy. i also loved visionary's and linzays very much. thanks for participating.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 05, 2004 2:48 pm
by LinzAy
wow...congrats stacey....that was a beautiful poem!! very very beautiful

PostPosted: Wed Oct 06, 2004 5:40 pm
by Stacey
Thanks :)