WEEK 31

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WEEK 31

Postby LinzAy » Sat Nov 20, 2004 6:29 am

So! I'm kinda scared because I may get yelled at if I don't choose a winner soon enough but I think I'll og through with this anyway ;)

This weeks topic is..........OPINION

....yeah. Not sure exactly what I'm looking for here but it sounds right....have fun:)
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Postby RinRin » Sat Nov 27, 2004 6:30 pm

Here's My Opinion

So here's my opinion -
People have made decisions
on everything from dying to living,
and I've made a few myself,
can't say I've deserved much else
but leading a life that's far from hell.
It's a contract that sells,
and the Devil has it all,
cause he's gotten so many to fall
as if life means nothing
for a billion people in this world
the carelessness they yield to,
as if God has selected them
for nothing else at all,
the way it all just calls
like severing your brain
into two halves - one for you
and one for me,
so you see, there's more to you and me
than there could ever be
if I had never made this decision
if I had never followed my own opinion -
We have so many,
like who's best for president
and who's more likely to win it
even though the other may be better
or worse than the other,
and like how people should be,
freedom and the free,
dogs or cats,
people ARGUE about that,
and I don't know it
if I show it
but I got an opinion too,
it's that me and you,
are much better together
than we ever were
before.

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Postby Dreamer » Sat Nov 27, 2004 10:28 pm

VOICES RAISED

Not only did we have words
It was a full blown fight
Each seeing things their own way
It turned into quite a night

Points of view were not the same
Emotions got in the way
Soon words were flying in all directions
Everyone seemed to have something to say

Finailly I knew I'd had enough
For the door I tried to to run
I knew that Opinions were like belly buttons
It's just, not everybody should show one



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Postby RinRin » Tue Dec 07, 2004 10:08 pm

Wow..this sure is a loooooong week!

:P

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Postby Dreamer » Wed Dec 08, 2004 5:29 am

lol
I guess we were hoping we would get a few more participants
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