Let's Write A Poem - week 1

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Postby bingholic98 » Wed May 21, 2003 11:36 am

Like us sky scrappers are vulnerable and bare.
They look strong and brave.


Pretending to be powerful and not care.
All they want is to be appreciated and viewed with awe.


Skyscrappers are weak and tall.
The way we are as humans , we aren't strong at all.
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Postby Dreamer » Sat May 24, 2003 10:38 pm

Man this is a harder choice than I first thought it might be. I read them and re-read them and still had a hard time.. But I think I am going to go with LinzAy carrying the torch for the next round and as the winner this time.. Congrats and great work for all

Okay Linz. Start a new topic thread same title but week two and choose us a subject .. Yay this time I get to play too :)
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Postby Dreamer » Sat May 24, 2003 10:53 pm

<b>SkyScrapers</b>
authored by all above


Can you imagine touching the sky
Or watching down from way up high
High above in the clouds
A place to be free with your dreams

like a sleeping giant just waiting for its time,
the sky blankets it's head,
Towering over another
Searching for meaning

The eyes are made of windows
The mouth is made of a door.
When the wind blows it doesnt budge.
When the rain falls it wont take cover.

Tall it stands, proud and in full glory,
all eyes on it,
to be appreciated and viewed with awe
The way we are as humans...
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Postby bench » Sun May 25, 2003 11:37 pm

Congratulations Linz! I re-read your poem and I think you deserve the honor! Hurray! I'm excited to start on the next! :D

Dreamer: Are you going to post these poems in the main page under our names or do we have to submit it? Thanks :)
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Postby Dreamer » Mon May 26, 2003 11:57 am

Bench:

I can if you want me to.

Just let me know who wants them posted.. and I will post them on site.

-Becky
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Postby bench » Mon May 26, 2003 6:46 pm

Thanks Becky.

You can post mine. Thanks again.
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Postby LinzAy » Mon May 26, 2003 10:53 pm

Wow!! I feel like i should do some like thankyou speeches! lol......i don't win a lot of things......lol.....thanks tho Becky....and bench for the compliment :)

And yes Becky....I'd like mine posted on the site :D tunkoo! And! i liked the mix!

Let's see i dunno what the topic should be.....hmmm.....

...tick tock tick tock tick tock...

Well if that didn't give me an idea!

The new topic shall be

time


lol..i'm bad at deciding things so choosing the topic was hard, hope it's somewhat of a good one!......damn, imagine how hard it'll be to choose the winner!

O! Becky....do i hafta mix the poems after i choose a winner?[/b]
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Postby rubydragon » Tue May 27, 2003 8:33 am

I do
The only true source of inspiration, is to be an inspiration.

There is No More Inspiration!!
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Postby Seizure » Tue May 27, 2003 9:34 am

Hmm... time... I think I might enter this second one... I would have entered the first one but I was too busy. If I can get a little free time (I got SQL scripting next, so I should have plenty) I can slap something together. I'm sure I'll lose, but it doesn't hurt to try I suppose.
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
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Postby bingholic98 » Thu May 29, 2003 8:22 pm

Linzay Your writing is so good. congratulations :D
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