WEEK 7

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Postby Seizure » Thu Jul 03, 2003 8:02 pm

they all look good to me...
Life is just a game, not everyone can win
-Seizure
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Postby Leah06 » Thu Jul 03, 2003 8:16 pm

except for mine, it looks like visionary is going to have a problem choosing for next week.
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Postby Guest » Thu Jul 03, 2003 9:06 pm

what's wrong with yours?
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Postby Leah06 » Thu Jul 03, 2003 9:31 pm

not that good thats all... Welcome guest! i hope you join this site! enjoy everything! And hopfully i will get to know you also........
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Postby Guest » Thu Jul 03, 2003 9:34 pm

Yeah, you already know me.. i'm just too lazy to enter my name...
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Thu Jul 03, 2003 11:45 pm

your is very good leah mine is the one that sucks!
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Postby Dreamer » Fri Jul 04, 2003 12:29 am

So many Freedoms I don't know where to start
Freedom to love. Freedom to fart?
Freedom to live, Freedom of choice,
Freedom to make noise, Freedom to voice

Freedom of knowlege, Freedom to hate
Freedom to learn, Freedom to participate
Freedom to come, Freedom to go
Freedom to run, Freedom to stroll

Freedom of truth, Freedom to lie
Freedom to question, Freedom to die
So many Freedoms to choose from.. I sigh
I guess I'll choose Freedom to enjoy The 4th of July
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okay lame but fun hehe :D :P
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Postby xeverettx » Fri Jul 04, 2003 1:43 am

Never Free

Never free from this nightmare
Never free from their cold stare
Never free from a life of despair
Never free, its just not fair

You are never free from a cold black sky
You are never free from your mirror's cry
You are never free from the pain you feel
You are never free from the wounds that just dont heal

Never free from a world full of hate
Never free from something as tricky as fate

Freedom will always have a price to pay
So live your life day by day
Say what you want to say
Dont let your opportunity slip away

How long will freedom last?
"I've Broken Both My Legs Falling For You..."
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Postby Brenda Michelle » Fri Jul 04, 2003 11:17 am

dang everett! i told you that you can come up with something good! i really like it!
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Postby Visionary » Fri Jul 04, 2003 9:42 pm

What Freedom means to me
For those men
Who faught so galantly

Freedom is earned
And not given
Freedom is learned
At the cost of heaven

Those who made choices
And dared to be great
Speaking up with their voices
Against tyrany and hate

To make this land Free for all
Not certain creeds or colors
Let no man fall
Against the jealousy of others

They made the decision
And from their blood we reap
All the benifits we enjoy
To live in this land is such a treat

All those we are fighting
do not undrstand
How Free they can be
In their own land

From my fathers father
to his father before
We'll all gladly sing this Freedom
Untill heavens door.




Hey all! Just got inspired ....(ya know me)....and had to put it down. I can't believe how hard it's going to be to pick a winner...geeeeesh. Hope you all are having a great and safe 4th of July. Please remember why this holiday exsists. Bye
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