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Betrayal
11 June, 2005
Author: Jim

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sparrow falls
sunflower seeds gutted
riddle of desire answered
the mortal will bent
stalks of love brittle
Oedipus

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Britney (67.136.99.19) -- Saturday, June 11 2005, 02:42 pm

good

i liked it
jim (205.188.116.203) -- Monday, June 13 2005, 01:37 am

SWEEEEEETTT!!!!!

thank you britney...glad u do...
 
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