The Day That I Died
4 July, 2005
Author: Shorty
My head was full of confusion
when you looked at me that way
I saw the sadness I knew I would feel soon too
My whole world turned upside down
as I watched my everything walk away
I could actually feel my heart breaking
It was cracking from the deepest part in my soul
It felt like the ground had just been ripped out from underneath me
I felt more alone than I've ever felt before
No one understood
They couldn't possibly know what it felt like to have no purpose in life
I had lost you
I lost my world
I lost my heart
because you stole it and I never really got it back
I lost my breath
my air
I lost my life
I died that day
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Gem_13 (81.151.218.235) -- Monday, July 4 2005, 06:02 pm i adore this poem the feeling you have put in is perfect thanks for sharing |
| Angel in Tears (86.135.186.90) -- Monday, July 4 2005, 07:11 pm Perfection on the feeling! |
| Terrie* (69.19.147.38) -- Monday, July 4 2005, 07:34 pm Shorty this was nost definently well expressed,from within the heart.know the feelin' soooo well,thanx 4 sharin' |
| Shorty (71.105.193.140) -- Thursday, July 7 2005, 09:31 pm Thanks for the comments guys, i really appreciate it.. i try : ) |
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