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The Day That I Died
Author: Shorty

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My head was full of confusion
when you looked at me that way
I saw the sadness I knew I would feel soon too
My whole world turned upside down
as I watched my everything walk away
I could actually feel my heart breaking
It was cracking from the deepest part in my soul
It felt like the ground had just been ripped out from underneath me
I felt more alone than I've ever felt before
No one understood
They couldn't possibly know what it felt like to have no purpose in life
I had lost you
I lost my world
I lost my heart
because you stole it and I never really got it back
I lost my breath
my air
I lost my life
I died that day

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Gem_13 (81.151.218.235) -- Monday, July 4 2005, 05:02 pm

LOVE IT

i adore this poem the feeling you have put in is perfect thanks for sharing
Angel in Tears (86.135.186.90) -- Monday, July 4 2005, 06:11 pm

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Perfection on the feeling!
Terrie* (69.19.147.38) -- Monday, July 4 2005, 06:34 pm

CPR or DNR???

Shorty this was nost definently well expressed,from within the heart.know the feelin' soooo well,thanx 4 sharin'
Shorty (71.105.193.140) -- Thursday, July 7 2005, 08:31 pm

Thanks

Thanks for the comments guys, i really appreciate it.. i try : )
 
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