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A Poem Dedicated To A Friend, With A Lost Heart
Author: Crimson Angel

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His care for her was endless
His love for her was great
And she felt just the same
They were destined to be each other's mate
Time moved on swiftly
As their love for eachother grew
Then one day his love had died
And his sorrow was greater than anyone knew
His story was heart-piercing
Left may to shed some tears
And this poem was for him
To show him his friends were here
We hope this will wither his sorrow
We hope his heart will mend
But until it does so
We will be here, to help tend.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Enchantress (206.216.224.67) -- Tuesday, August 5 2003, 08:39 pm

So sweet!

I really enjoyed this one Crimson Angel, it was so heart touching. Almost like reading a part of a novel. It was very lovely, keep writing, I'll keep reading.Your fan, Enchantress
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Wednesday, August 6 2003, 12:45 am

Author's Comment

Thanks you soooooo much! This poem was for a friend, because his girlfriend died saving her sister, so I wanted to make him feel better, to show him that his friends are there. Thank you so much again for your comment, I bet he will love it as well! :-)
KitKatrina (68.116.64.38) -- Sunday, August 10 2003, 01:44 am

Great!

I love your poem. It was very sweet of you to write this for your friend. It was truly beautiful and I hope I read more of your poems!
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Sunday, August 10 2003, 03:20 pm

Author's Comment

Thanks! ^-^ I felt bad for my friend, since his girlfriend meant much to him, and since I haven't been around much, I thought I should write something just to let him know I was there to comfort him. But thanks alot for the compliment! :-)
Ben (67.123.244.173) -- Sunday, August 10 2003, 03:35 pm

To help tend to a.........

To help tend to a friend's aching heart is a good thing, Crimson Angel. I like what this poem coveys and it is touching. Thank you for your writing!
Crimson Angel (12.249.164.87) -- Monday, August 11 2003, 12:41 pm

Author's Comment

Thanks, Ben, I'm glad ye liked it. Unfortunately, I haven't seen my friend for some time now, so I'm hoping that he is somewhere, where he can clear his mind, to feel better, but thanks once again, I'm glad other people feel the same way I do, about poetry. :-)
Shay (152.163.252.225) -- Thursday, October 2 2003, 01:57 pm

That was sweet

That was so nice of u to make a poem about your friend. I really liked that poem because I had one of those situations before and I wish my life would change and this poem touched me inside. That is a nice poem and you as a poet hav incourage me to write a poem for my Poetry subject at school. Do you think I could keep in touch with you? I was hoping you can give info about poetry because i want to be a poet and publish my poems someday. Im in 8th Grade in the year of 2003-2004. Well you incourage me to write more poems and Ive made about 14 of them. Thank you
Crimson Angel (67.162.95.179) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 10:06 pm

Author's Comment

I suppose I haven't been on lately to check me comments. =3 But nonetheless, thank you for the comment, I really appreciated it. I suppose I've been in that situation too, but we all overcome it. But sometimes, one needs a little comfort to ease the pain a bit. That's why I wrote this. I'm glad to have inspired you for your poetry subject in class, and maybe we could keep in touch. I, too, would like to publish mine someday, or at least a decent novel. Seventh grade here for 03-04. Thank you once more for your comment, and you're welcome.
 
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