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I Fear The Shadow Of My Heart And Soul
Author: Terrie*

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My heart feels, like a shadow
Lost in the dark?

I worry that my soul, will wonder off
and get lost?

I fear these tears, I still shed
as I lay alone in my bed?

I wonder,when my heart speaks
is it even, bein’ heard?

I start feelin’ sad,when my heart separates
from my soul when I close my eyes?

I am so afraid, of wakin’ up
Findin’ my shadow drownin' with-out your love

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 02:58 am

Terra

Lady T Bird! A heart can't thump-thump or beat its rhythmic beat without love. It can't survive without compassion or passion for that matter. Like your last two lines in your poem above there! Always the best! Love Queen, you probably have a heart so big, the whole world could fit inside it. Beautiful words Lady T!
John (82.0.191.200) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 05:36 pm

Ditto

Can only agree with Meri in all she has said!
Terrie* (69.19.204.77) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 05:41 pm

Meri my friend, our Poetic Princess

my husband always called me Terra ; ), you are so right a hear caint survive w/o love, don't know how i made it this far w/out his love, sometimes you find the touch of it where you least expect it..my heart has the capacity to love not just one but many..as i share his touch..from beyound, chux,i dunt know if i cain fit the whole world psst, i'm tryin' to achieve that goal..thank you for your kind words...
Terrie* (69.19.204.77) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 05:48 pm

; )

John, your such a royal man , always sharin' your hearts best, thank you! your the best !!
martin vann (4.226.222.205) -- Thursday, November 3 2005, 06:20 pm

A Shadow Can Lead A Heart To Light

Shadows seem to be, the only light in our lonely hearts, they shine with love from past times. Do not fear, the quiet whisper of your heart, listen to every word, silence is, the partner, of a loving and searching heart. This is a poem soaked with love, from a woman's heart.
Ing Twi Demalah (159.105.102.64) -- Friday, November 4 2005, 01:22 am

Love.......

Love, to have it can hurt almost as much as being without it and yet that is the adventure of loving to the fullest extent, such sweet pain, a wonderful ache. Truly this poem expresses both these aspects beautifully. Wonderfully done Terrie, absolutely wonder.
Terrie* (69.19.171.141) -- Sunday, November 6 2005, 01:52 pm

the warmth of love lives in a heart..

yes ,definently love hurts either way , yet i found pain more severe when death takes love away, thank you for your warm words....
Terrie* (69.19.173.230) -- Tuesday, November 8 2005, 01:15 am

Ing...

i wanted to add and failed to say on my reply to you above..that you are so right..love cain truely be a sweet tastin' pain when you love with your heart and soul to it's fullest capacity, it cain ache a plentiful pain so hard to descrbe and explain...
 
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