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So All Alone In My World Without A Dream
15 November, 2005
Author: Terrie*

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If my destiny was to fly into the realm
Will your heart remember mine?
If I had to leave for just one night
Would your heart rescue me and bring me back?

If I told you I loved you
Would you be able to say the same to me?
If I told you to let me go
Would you be able to understand why?

If you knew I was cryin’
Would you take me into your arms?
If I gave you more than my love
Would you accept whom i was?

If I said I need you now
Would you fly out to me?
If I faded away into a dark cloud
Would you chase me down until I’m found?

if i woke up cryin', scared and alone
would you hold me, and place me comfortably in your dream?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

JF (80.6.51.13) -- Tuesday, November 15 2005, 02:27 pm

If

This is a poem full of questions....but I think in your heart you probably know the answers..
Terrie* (69.19.207.53) -- Tuesday, November 15 2005, 05:17 pm

A heart is a questionable organ

yes,sometimes a heart gets stubborn and has to have an answer to questions it already knows.. ..
Meridian (205.188.116.203) -- Tuesday, November 15 2005, 05:56 pm

Hope he answers yes

Hey Lady T! Queen of Love Poetry! I know it would probably be disappointing to you to hear him say no or maybe...because maybe means he'll think about it... I know this world isn't composed of real super-men, but you anticipate on him to catch a plane right then, comfort you right then, talk to you right then and so on... You're on a roll all the time, and on the time, you're on a roll! Wonderous!
Terrie* (66.81.136.52) -- Wednesday, November 16 2005, 05:25 pm

His answer will never change

i'm sure the answer will never change, i'm just sooo spoiled...sooooo demandin'...well.. actually ,i'm well loved...just want to make sure i share his dream..
 
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