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Friendship
14 January, 2003
Author: DaRascal

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We were so close together
Now so far apart
What happend in between
I can only feel in my heart

I wish you were here
To talk with me today
But i cant pick up the phone
My body wont obey

Things seemed to be so perfect
Now they seem so wrong
I don't feel as though i know you
Where has our friendship gone

You used to be able to talk with me
About everything you felt
Now i feel I'm a sranger
My heart is starting to melt

We always used to talk
Until the middle of the night
I dont know what we talked about
But never once in a fight

I need you in my life
I need you as a friend
I need to laugh and smile with you
Forever till the end

I still don't know what has happened
Our friendship has lasted so long
But I cant help from wondering
What did i do wrong?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Thursday, January 16 2003, 12:02 am


Aw, that is so sad, yet i'm sure it's happened to so many people. We all need good friends that we can open up to. well written
Natomas (172.173.86.247) -- Wednesday, January 29 2003, 06:35 am

true

that's exactly whats going on with me and my bestfriend and it's sad that we are at this point, but hey things happen and hopefully things change for the better.
stubborn (142.59.104.228) -- Tuesday, September 16 2003, 06:40 am

....

you didnt do anything wrong . Growing apart w/ ppl that we love is apart of life....
jasmine (69.133.75.254) -- Friday, November 28 2003, 02:44 am

I love it

Thats so nice i am having these problems right now with my friend and this poem really helped thanks...I love it
 
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