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Our Cottage On The Moon
27 October, 2003
Author: Del

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You said you'd build me a cottage,
Somewhere on the moon.
A cozy little cottage,
We wouldn't need much room.

We'd have time for lotsa kissin',
So much time to spoon,
Someone to watch over us,
The Almighty Man In The Moon.

Instead of chasin' rainbows,
We'd pick a moonbeam from the sky.
We'd try to catch a falling star,
Falling from way up high.

I know we'd be so happy,
In this cottage in the sky.
We'd hold each other tight at night,
And watch the rest of the world roll by.

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Silkened Moon (206.216.224.1) -- Saturday, November 29 2003, 05:29 pm

BRAVO! BRAVO! ONCORE! ONCORE!

Hoped I spelled oncore right! THis poem was absolutely beautiful. Not because it has a part of my dreamersreality name, but because it seemed like a little story; that's what I loved about it. I love fantasy, Del, and this poem drenches in it. Not only do I love the fantasy, but once again, I love your LOVE POEMS! They're absolutely amazing! If you ever put your love poems in a book, I mean ever, I want to be the very first owner of a copy. I really mean it! Think about it Del, these love poems are so sweet and touching to the lover's heart! I think you'd make it! Awesome work Del, fantasy and romance in one are my favorite!
 
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