Author: Manny


The void becomes greater
The walls become thinner
The anger erupts, and my mind becomes a sinner
The world stops moving, and air becomes scolding
My words begin to fade
My life is over; even trade
My emotions are shattered, and my being is scattered
Real is fake, and fake is plastered
My soul is weathered with bits, and blisters
Every being is unknown with elderly, and clones
The odd is good, and the good is stood
My life is alteredů
You are applauded

------- Author's Notes -------

I wrote this during class.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Ripley ( -- Thursday, November 20 2008, 12:54 am


I think u r suppose to be doing classwork during class, lol. I like this poem and all of your other ones, although some of them make me sad
LinzAy ( -- Thursday, November 20 2008, 05:21 pm


Love it.
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