Did You Leave Paradise
Author: Dino Hi


Paradise is the beauty,you see in one's heart and mind
Ocean so blue, white sand beaches, soft gentle breeze, and warm tropical nights
Is this how we view paradise?
Sitting on a mountain top, so quiet, so clear, so very peaceful, watching a bird soar by
Is this paradise?
Walking, riding a horse or bike in a forest, seeing beautiful trees, plants, and animals roam
Could be my paradise?
Playing with your dog in the backyard, seeing your kids laugh and run with joy, having a barbeque with friends
This has to be my paradise?
Paradise? Where is it? I wonder, could you be standing on it, or did you leave paradise


Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn ( -- Tuesday, November 12 2002, 12:06 am


We all have our own view of paradise - I have more than one, but you have made me think about it - thanks!
XoForeverXo ( -- Thursday, March 27 2003, 03:31 am

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Yeh, i loved this poem. The simple things in life are sometimes the happiest thing to us. It really made me think about what really is important to me! Great job!!!
Martin Vann ( -- Thursday, March 27 2003, 02:09 pm

Right On, I see a LOT more now, than I did.


Very good, Your pen became my eyes. I'm sitting here at the old Comp-U-Ter screen and you made me think, I could be in Australia, being chased by a pack of wild, hungry, Dingos. Yes, I love this place where I now sit, it is Paradise, compared to.

Thanks, life is good.
Dino ( -- Friday, March 28 2003, 06:50 am

Really surprized!

I'm really surprized to get a delayed reaction, on my 4th poem I ever wrote. I'm glad it made you think. Thanks Cap, XoForeverXo, and Martin, for even reading my poems and your nice comments. Wild dingos Martin? You crack me up! Ha! Enjoy your paradise everyone, what ever it may be.
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