Never Good
Author: LinzAy


You were never good for me anyway…
Telling me I was starting a new family-expecting me to just forget who raised me and who I raised…
It wasn’t healthy…the way you made me feel intentionally-so sad
You latched me onto your heart and soul and then used him against me when we were no more
I was the mouse you chased…or muse you only saw fit to use…a fun game for a while
Taking me from one side…to the other-where the grass was supposedly greener…
It was only dead I later learned
I should have never allowed myself to fall into such a false love…
…You were never good for me anyway-not even from the start


Comments on this poem/writing:

Laraine Smith ( -- Sunday, September 13 2009, 08:27 pm


I'm sorry for what you went through.
LinzAy ( -- Monday, September 14 2009, 10:56 pm


Thanks and learn I that one person can have an affect on your outlook on love-whether you continue to believe in it or not-though
Tarna ( -- Sunday, September 20 2009, 04:49 am

Lessons learned

Each love gone wrong takes us closer to the one that will last forever. We learn about ourselves when love goes wrong.. Never give up on love.. But that doesn't mean you have to look for in the same direction.

Good writing about a relationship gone bad. Sorry you had to go thru it.. But it is one step closer to the real one...
Laraine Smith ( -- Sunday, September 20 2009, 05:12 pm

You're welcome!

LinzAy ( -- Monday, September 21 2009, 01:23 am


Thank you for the encouragement Tarna :) and compliment of on the poem.
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