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She Wants To Kiss Him All Over
12 December, 2009
Author: Karla Bardanza

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The Moon gazes at Mercury with silent hands and desire.
She wants to lick and kiss him all over again and again
as she tenderly burns him with her sweetest fizzy fire,
drinking his eyes, tongue and mouth with champagne.

She craves for his poetic words of passion and lust
as she hears his sexy whispers in a fiery embrace.
She knows all the dangers but she will self-combust
if it takes too long to taste his body and lovely face.

This passion is agitating her flowers and shooting stars.
Sometimes she can’t breathe, he is so close, he is there.
Maybe she has to put this passion behind some bars,
Maybe she has to hide her profane thirst somewhere.

What could she do but ask for this perfect pleasure?
She wants him so bad, she wants him below and above.
He would make a wonderful toy, she needs some leisure.
After all it is just a crush (she thinks) or… No!!!Is it love?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

John Lee Hooker (69.157.15.13) -- Saturday, December 12 2009, 06:24 pm

BOOM, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM......

BOOM, BOOM, BOOM, BOOM .....I LIKE IT LIKE THAT!!!!
I just feel like a little boy in your candy store!
barb (67.58.196.122) -- Monday, December 14 2009, 06:51 pm

good write

Sexual thinking.Writes on this kind of thing are disgusting to me.These sort of thoughts should be privbate
Karla Bardanza (187.77.179.166) -- Tuesday, December 15 2009, 12:47 am

Thanks God...

A lot of people don't agree with you.I do believe we should be free to write whatever we feel like to.Are we poets or not?Sex is life.Besides if you read my poem again, you will see she loves him.IT IS NOT ONLY SEX!!!!!!!!
Tarna (22.249.225.332) -- Tuesday, December 15 2009, 04:48 pm

Love is good

My favorite line is "she knows all the dangers but she will self combust"

This poem speaks to me of the human sensuality which lust and need and a hunger are part of.. A part of the human nature.

good write/good read
 
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