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The Guy Who Didn't Get It
24 February, 2011
Author: tommyg

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Fred was born on beautiful spring day. His mother couldn't keep him though cause she was in big trouble. Rosy his mom was a drug addict and could never see the light. They helped her and helped her until it was too late she died with her only love she understood.

Rosy lived a life most would dread to be their's. Her life was abuse it turned into the only way she could express herself. Her soul was stolen at an early age, she could only replace the hole with quick remedy. Her solution was her destruction cause no person should feel such pain. Denial her world frozen and cold. Everyone the enemy stealing a little pieces of her heart for kicks. She was the perfect victim, her face of pain. A secret angel watched this poor soul, and decided it was time for her to lay to rest. Everyone thought surely she would go to h*ll, they were so sure and smug, they laughed at her grave. Angel of sorrow, drifted down and swooped up. She never would have guessed such a magic suprise. How come noone could see her now, she saw from distant familiar eyes.

Fred grew up with foster parents who did love him so. He always felt like someone was watching, he couldn't put his finger on it. Something was there, he felt in the sanctuary of church. His mother he never knew, until something happened to his thoughts. Fred fell into daydream, a welcoming deja vu. He saw his mother in a statue of virgin mary, so quick it didn't seem real. For the rest of his life he remembered that day and never questioned God, he lived without fear of what might or what should be. Fred lived a simple life, with a beautiful wife and kids, out in the country. Everyday was so great no one understood how he could be so pleasantly content. Fred such a gentle kind soul everyone always let him be.

One day a snailsman(salesman) came to his door. The salesmen was sell with lies and tricky. He was selling the perfect vaccuum cleaner to Fred. He lied and lied and told no truth. Fred just watched as he did his song and dance. No act seem good enough to my Fred bite. This made the salesman challenged and exicted to conjure a new big lie. This didn't catch fred by any suprise. He lied and lied until he ran out of steam, Fred just looked at him. This made the salesman nuts. So he cursed at Fred, and stuck his tounge out in hate. Then Fred stole his demons, the salemans eyes crossed. Fred seen his mom again take the salesman's thoughts and leave.

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