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Little Flower, On My Car Window
29 March, 2003
Author: ShyHeart

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(Dedicated To His Poetic Friends)


I had a meeting to attend, you know the kind,
It meant my future and involved a "lot" of moan-nay
Business had been slow and I was getting hungry
Heard the wolves at my front door, I knew I had
To do something, and do it in a hurry.

It had rained the night before. I had bought a new brief-case,
And a suit, but my car, looked like poodle-poop!
So, to the car wash I went, I needed to look sharp
And shinny, this deal meant a lot to me,
Can’t afford to feed the wolves, now can we?

So, there I was at the automatic, clean your car,
Make you look great, get that deal, car wash
Damn, so many cars ahead of me. Will that darn,
Muddy pick-up truck dictate my destiny?
What rotten luck, it will take forever
To clean that pick-up truck!

Finally, my turn, okay, punch in the code,
Great, the little screen said go! Oh, but wait,
Hadn’t noticed this before, guess the wind
And rain had stuck a little flower, to my window
I see it now, stuck in the corner.

This little flower was so beautiful,
I thought of all it had been through,
Just to end up on my window
Now, I planned to send it through
This hot, air-blown, watery hell?

No, not me, I am a poet, beauty is too hard to find
And I’ll not destroy any, that comes to me!
So, I got out of my car and behind me
I heard, horns starting to honk,
Some non-index fingers,
I saw, all pointed right at me.

Yet, my poet’s heart, said save this little flower
From a hot and watery death, and this I did
I gently lifted, the beautiful, little flower and set her
upon the dash board of my exotic, but not too pretty car.

Then, as I started to drive in, horns still honking,
There was this tapping on my window.
I hit the automatic window button,
Expecting to see a fist, as my window
Came sliding down.

Then I saw, this lovely lady, her eyes as green
As any emerald ever found, a smile that would
Force the sun to seek shelter
Behind the nearest cloud.

Then, she said to me, I saw what you just did
For that little flower and though we both know,
It will wilt and fade away. But, I saw such
A tenderness, as I have never
Seen before, in any other man.
I just wanted to ask you why you
Did that for such a little flower?

Well, I gave this lovely, lady my sincere reply,
She had so, surprised me, no reason for me to lie,
And I told her why. She smiled, then hell,
She just walked away, got back
Into her car, and that was it!

Anyway, I got to the meeting and sharp,
Clean, polished and "ready" was I.
Every question they asked of me,
Nailed them, every one and never spoke a lie.

Then, the presiding, big wig said, that is enough,
This board is satisfied, you can do the job,
But there is one more, that you must convince,
Meet our President, MS"., then, guess who walked in?

Point: love yourself because you love beauty
and as a poet, you must protect it,
believe me, you will be rewarded.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (64.12.96.72) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 11:08 am

''''''

Martin, I don't even know what to say! This was so cute and awesome!!! Beauty really is something yo treat preciously. Great meaning behind the poem.
Red Dragon (210.14.4.51) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 12:43 pm

~..~

This is an example that art immitates life...Clearly written with a definite purpose. My friend, you're style never ceases to amuse me...Bravo!
Martin Vann (65.56.173.5) -- Monday, March 31 2003, 04:55 pm

Thanks, I like what you say and feel.

LinzAy & R.D.

This was one of those poems that didn't require much work, just started writing about that flower and this was the result. As you both along with Cap & Barb have said to me and to others, "Just write what you feel, forget the word games." You all show me many things with your own work. I thank you all, for each and every line, be it mine or yours.
MartinV
barb (206.191.91.5) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 12:03 am

love kindness

oh this is so beautiful.showing the beauty in things.I even won't step on an ant that is carrying the dead ant.How do you destroy hope.I get carried away when something touches me and this poem did that. thanks for sharing martin
martin Vann (63.208.44.178) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 12:56 am

"How do you destroy hope, mis-type I hope?" use small words, please.

I understand why you won't step on your Aunt, sorry, typo, meant to say ant. Tell me, how do I destroy hope? By the way, I still believe in sweet corn, their ears of silk, held softly to my heart, I hear them speak, and I hear your voice. Barb, you are becoming a heart throb. Can you manage my words, they are starting to go, bump, bump, Barb, Al-A-Thump.

MartinV
Leah (24.72.92.94) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 01:01 am

?????

I really like the poem but who walked in at at the end??? I really want to know I got the point and all but who walked in some 1 from the car wash who was mad?
Xeracy (205.124.145.254) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 02:08 am

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Beautiful. I love how the guy stopped to save something that seemingly has no importance. Who would've know that his decision to save the flower would lead to the topic of a poem? :) He knew that the flower will die, but he decided to save it anyway. Even with people yelling he did what he felt what right. I like his courage. Any of this poem true? If so, what parts? Is it about you?
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 03:29 am

Martin Vann....

Well Nice work as usual. Saving a flower is not pointless. Who would want to destroy somthing of such beauty? The wilting of a flower is depressing but the color and life it had before the wilting started made it all worth while. And to answer your question Leah, The lady in which he saw when saving the flower was the girl who walked in.Great Poem MARTIN VANN!!!!!
barb (206.191.91.5) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 06:14 am

wakey wakey

I didn't mean you destroy hope Martin I meant the aunt(Ha Ha) that was carrying the dead one I couldn't kill. I already killed the one he was carrying Heeee And believe me if you did hear my voice. you'd run ask capricorn I talked to her on the phone.Well I tried.:)
barb (206.191.91.5) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 06:18 am

oh yeh

poodle poop Martin? Ha Ha you mean doggie do- do or DOG ----
Martin Vann (67.30.70.176) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 04:40 pm

Answers about the Flower...,

The part about saving that little flower was true, and it had stormed the night before and my neighbor's flowers had started to bloom, she had some potted plants and the storm worked them over pretty good. That was I think where the flower came from. People were honking and some were quire rude, but they were in a hurry. You know how it goes. Barb, you really, tickle "me funny bone." I knew what you meant about the ants, but enjoy hearing from you, so, I was har-ras-ing you. Yes, doggie do would do, but I prefer poodle poop, don't you? {Are we getting weird here?}

I think the other questions have been answered by replies.
Thanks All!<br>
MartinV
barb (66.46.241.67) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 04:47 pm

poodle poop

yea poodle poop is funnier you are rightand politer than dog do do Hhha. keep writing I look for your poems.
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 04:07 pm

Hi!

I seem to be a little late catching up on this one, but I'm so glad I found it 'cos it is so beautiful.It takes a poet, I feel, to see beauty in all things....and Barb I loved your voice 'cos you're my friend!
I could tell as I read this one, that it was really `flowing' out of you Martin. Well written..I love it!
Martin Vann (63.208.44.184) -- Monday, June 9 2003, 06:04 pm

I'm slow to, CAP

Been busy at work, lot's of stuff going on, hard to find the the time the Feel and write, I can't do one woth out the other. I'm sure you know what I mean, Kind of have to" Get that baby Crying,"

MartinV
 
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