Wave Of Refreshment
Author: Pamela O'Brien


It's interesting how a few simple words,
Can inspire a person to put their soul on paper,
And yet in just as few simple words,
Your soul can be turned to vapour.
A comment made by someone left me with a wave of refreshment and enthusiasm,
However, the love that I gave left me with a tsunami of pessimism.
The sum of all my fears can be depicted in contradiction,
It's interesting because I defend myself against those who offer protection.


Comments on this poem/writing:

barb ( -- Saturday, October 12 2002, 02:37 pm

wrong choices

This poem hits the nail on the head for me. I always draw closer people that will hurt me,but drive away people that really care. Bad choices...
Pamela ( -- Saturday, October 12 2002, 08:06 pm

I think I speak for us All.....

When I say - we all do. Thats why thers so much depression in the world. Those who want to offer happiness don't have it, and those who don't have it steal it from those who need it.
luc ( -- Saturday, October 12 2002, 10:28 pm

no title

pretty deep...
Name:                                           Remember Me

Comment Title:

Comment / Ammendment:

Please complete the recaptcha below for spam prevention:

Click here to read other Poems by Pamela O'Brien


Poetic Dreams Other's Poetic Dreams Submit a Poem New This Week Forum Home

Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack

COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved.   No part of this website, including all pictures and written words,  may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without  permission of the original author of the work.  All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner.  All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail:  so the proper person may be notified.