The Day The World Stood Still
Author: RubyDragon


The day the world stood still
I lay on my back,
and cry at the fact I still love
then with a mighty sharp crack,
the thunder clapped all around
and the rain hit the ground,

The day the world stood still
I lay here and I cry,
the stormy weather contemplating my fate
for no unusual reason why,
I just lay here in the darkened night
longing for the morning light,

The day the world stood still
I lay and I lay and I lay,
and for some uncertain realisation
I just want to stay,
out here in the blackened rain
with the weeping fears that will never refrain.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 ( -- Monday, December 15 2003, 02:04 am


finally another poem from you! YAY! This one was really good. i enjoyed it alot. thanks for posting and i hope to read more soon. Great job!

Leah Kendall
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