It took me by the throat
as my heart turned upside down,
and my hands were shaking
whilst everything was twisting around,
fiery eyes fill with tears so cold
anger and loss begin to take hold,
no control what so ever
crawling along the icy floor,
knowing what has happened and nothing else
even when love is forever more,
hearing my burnt soul screaming
only wishing that I am dreaming,
the grip tightens, cannot breathe right
don't care about nothing around,
no-one to see this heart breaking
or my tears freeze the ground,
I will be found somehow
until then, what do I do now?
Comments on this poem/writing:
|LinzAy (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 12:48 pm|
|Red Dragon (184.108.40.206) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:15 pm|
Lemme answer the last line for you: what you can do now is to enjoy life...take time to see and be with the people you have and might have neglected while you were in the arms of your heartbreaker....gradually you'll never notice that you already are moving on...am here...
your Dragon companion
|Red Dragon (220.127.116.11) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:17 pm|
Btw, nice work...maybe we could write together and come up with sumthin sometime...w'dya th'nk? :)
|Mandy Kana (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 01:55 pm|
AWESOME!!!! that was a great piece of poetry! you got some talent of writing!--See ya
|RubyDragon (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 02:03 pm|
Thanx Mandy and LinzAy. Red Dragon you got yourself a deal!!
|RedDragon (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 12:11 pm|
|Leah06 (188.8.131.52) -- Thursday, September 11 2003, 02:18 am|
Ill be here to mend your heart if you need me. Great poem. As for what you do now, look for the girl of your dreams, fall in love, and live happily ever after!
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