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Vanity, Lust, Sin
5 April, 2004
Author: Scorpio

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Vanity; Countenance of everlasting beauty
One only a selfish could love
Gazing into the mirror of pretension
Clasped within its only desire
Her look indeed for that of nobility
Wearing the highest of dues
Jewelry of the finest drip from every core
Flawless to the surface
Disturbed in the soul
Simply the result of a beautiful mistake

Lust; Jealousy prying within her heart
Crave into the etchings of features
Beneath the sensuous eyes covered in lash
Lay the cold vengeful soul of in vain
Lifted into a higher temptation
Securing within contusioned formation
This is the mere outcome of want mistaken for need

Sin; Pesenting a molden corpse
With everything to play on
Strumming fingertips to feel
To touch with the need
If only to make the significant other happy
Would they stay to remain entertained
Only if it were this for the only reason
Yet the reason were highly mistaken

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.146) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 05:23 pm

Props!

You deserve them Scorpio! For such deep and estatic definitions on "Vanity, Lust, and Sin". Just like saying, step 1, step 2, and step 3!
Good job Scorpio!

Meridian
Scorpio (209.175.72.252) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 08:22 pm

Thank you!

Thanks so much! I mainly wrote it for a character of mine on a game, it's how she is. But it's also sort of for the other people out there just like it! Thanks again!
ProfetaAmor (208.71.79.254) -- Tuesday, January 8 2013, 07:31 pm

Enjoyed it!

I enjoyed it and out of curiosity what hame are you talking about?
 
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