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If Only I Could Dream You Back
Author: Terrie*

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where have I been?
where do I want to go?
perhaps on a journey untraveled
traveling straight to you

what did I do?
what do I want to do?
to love & live life to the fullest
I'll start it by living it with you

what did I think?
what do I want to think ?
to enrich & absorb every desirable thought
unmentioned and present them to you

what did I feel?
what do I want to feel?
to expose and share feelings unexpressed ,
unfelt and unseen and wrap them all around you

where have I been
where am I going
I'm staying on the road
that leads me only to you


what will I do ?
I'll wrap my loving arms
around you

what will I think?
I will think of moments
that you and I will share

what will I feel?
I will feel my heart singing
w/content to have you at my side

what will I say
I will show
and tell you...

I will start telling you
how much I've grown
to love you

and I will show you
just how much my love
has continued to grow...

what will i feel?
i will feel the love
that once was so real
if only.....
i didn't have to close my eyes
to make it real...
if only....
just once i could...
if only i could dream you back...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.209.107) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 06:32 pm

I've read this one also on poetry.com!

I was just telling Clive, that I've read his poetry submitted on poetry.com! I've read, yours, Clive's, Martin's, Mark's, and many others! All of you have special talents!
I esp. like this poem, "If only I could dream you back". I wish we could all bring the deceased back with our dreams, and prayers.

Soul-stirring poem Terrie!
Terrie* (65.148.210.111) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 11:20 pm

Meridian...

Thanx for reading/commenting...yea i have several on P.C only thing is that there i am only allowed a short version of my poetry, thank you once again for such an uplifting praise....Terrie*
Tammy (66.38.6.22) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 09:24 pm

Terrie*

This is a beautiful poem.....I truely enjoyed reading it. I should have been checking to see if you had any new ones. I am truely gonna get caught up on reading them.But this was a very beautiful piece.
Terrie* (65.148.208.92) -- Saturday, March 27 2004, 01:01 am

Tammy,

i'm so touched that you found beauty in these words...you have a way of presenting a comment that makes me appreciate my poem a tad bit more thanx...Terrie*
 
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