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The Color Of Love
26 January, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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the color of love
stands above all silvers and gold
the color of love
carries you far beyond when you both have grown old

the color of love
felt deeply within each chamber of the heart
the color of love
a magical form of art

the color of love
a feeling so rare
the color of love
precious beauty to share

the color of love
as innocent as a white dove
the color of love
originated from above

the beauty of love
lies in the inner beauty that unfolds
the color of love
embedded in your heart forever to hold

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sarah A (82.35.77.73) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 07:16 pm

Terrie*

i love this poem. i cant say i can exactly relate to it just yet though, maybe in a few years time. it makes love sound magical almost... that it's the one thing to make life perfect. it reminds me of a fairytale. i hope one day i get the chance to feel that way too. keep up the great writing.... Sarah A :)
Princess Moon (168.53.173.132) -- Tuesday, January 27 2004, 09:38 pm

Ah! The Color of LOVE....very nice

I really enjoyed this one Terrie, it almost made me see what love is like. Sort of like putting me there actually, I could never have come up with such a poem as "Color of Love". This poem was so awesome! How do you come up with such tender and sweet words? What was your inspiration. I really enjoyed this one, Great job!
Terrie* (65.148.212.31) -- Wednesday, January 28 2004, 05:18 pm

Sarah A & Princess M....

Sara,
someday you will experience true love. Magical? absolutely!!!...love can carry you off into a world of enchantment..a make believe fairy tale that truly does exist in your heart...
Princess M,
when you fall in love..words appear in front of you, you feel them,you visualize them,you taste them, you become the words that beat in your heart.i got my inspiration from the man that i feel in love with.(my husband) thank you both for you kind and thoughtful comments..Terrie
Matthew Carey (81.109.249.228) -- Wednesday, February 18 2004, 06:53 pm

Exelent

I am 12 and 12 year olds think poems are for how can i put this geeks but i thought yours was fantastic
Terrie* (65.150.170.205) -- Wednesday, February 18 2004, 07:45 pm

Matthew....

sweetie,
thank you for your honest comment, but...believe me hon,it isn't just 12 year olds that think like that...Poetry is for anybody that can feel life...feel anything in life...ya know what i mean ? ya do not have to understand life...but words expressed are pretty much a part of life..Thanx again, have an excellent day!!! Terrie*
 
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