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Aging
21 October, 2001
author: Rebecca Ditch-Hammack (aka Dreamer)

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Growing older
Mind in tact
Body's changing
Nothings lack

Forever young
State of mind
Wrinkles showing
Life's unkind

Nothing boring
Nothing's ban
Enjoying life
Best I can

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Kenneth Hoffman (4.250.51.18) -- Sunday, October 31 2004, 11:24 pm

Life Philosophy

Exactly how I think. Nice attention to meter.
I just would change ban to banned.
 
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