Author: DreamWeaver


I donít wanna hurt no more,
I juss wanna kno if he loves me
Dose he care bout me,
I wanna be in his arms
No Ėone knos how I feel
He told me he loved me
And I believed him
Then he left me
For her Ö.
Dose he love her
I don know, maybe
Was he scared to love me?
Or did he not love me
Why dose it matter
Heís with her now
But the way he makes me feel,
Feel special, not used
I love him, I wanna let him kno
Kno how much I love him
How much I care
There no-one who can
Who can make me laugh and smile,
The way he did/dose
When in with him
Nothin matter
Its juss him and me
Alone away from
The world
Then he brushes his hand
Against my cheek
There I go, the butterflies are back
They flutter around, I giggle
He stares at me, and holds my face
Then, then the kiss
My hearts bout to explode
Itís like we were melting
There in the sand together
Under the stars, juss him and me
Then, juss then I wake up,
I was juss dreaming,
I was living a dream, and now itís gone!!


Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian ( -- Saturday, May 1 2004, 02:51 pm

Hey there!

DREAMWEAVER! Weaving dreams again eh? I love your poem whole-heartedly! Don't you hate it when you dream about something that soothes your soul, and all of a sudden, the dream fades away......And you wanna make yourself continue the dream, but it just ain't happening? I've found myself getting mad sometimes.....but, they'll always come back, becomes I'm known to "dream"! In so many words, I mean to say, I really like the way you write!! Laugh out Loud!

Smile dreamweaver!

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