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What More Is Left To Give...
12 May, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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what more can I give
if I gave it all to you?
tell me,what more ?

I cannot love again
I don't have any left to give away
you gave me pleasure
you gave me pain

we had love
we had romance
i've become another lonely heart
like a plague it will get the best of me


I do not want to choose love
I want it to appear
the way that you did
I want it to choose me

my heart is in agony
my heart is in pain
i will never find a love so true
and as powerful and committed as you

you were the only one
that managed to touch my heart
no matter how much
I want and try to love
my heart still brings me back to you
because your heart and mine
will always belong as one....

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Tammy (66.38.4.234) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 09:14 am

Terrie*

This poem is wonderful...your heart speaks to the world with the beauty your writing holds.
Terrie* (65.142.64.193) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 03:50 pm

Tammy,

thank you!! that was a very lovely comment....Have a beautiful day..Terrie*
Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 07:26 pm

Terrie, terrie

After you've done all you can.....
After you gave all you could...
There's nothing left to give after you've given your all
Your whole heart
Your soul
Your everything
Love will find it's way to you
I can feel it in my bones.......

Have fun Terrie!
Delightful poem!

Your buddy,

Meri
Terrie* (65.136.7.164) -- Wednesday, May 12 2004, 10:46 pm

Meri,

'aye buddy, thank you for such a comments..
yea i promised myself to look the other way if love found me ha ha, i'm not ready to sacrafice my freedom yet..ha ha ha i enjoy my coffee morning breaks with my buds in blue ,way too much..have a lovely day! Terrie*
 
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