Metal Detector Man Don't Crowd My View
Author: Sean Richard Clifton


Flip flops and beaches,
The sand fully resurrecting me,
Those lawyers, those leaches,
I get rid of them drinking by the sea!

Jimmy Buffet and Bob Marley,
Your music delivers the right punch,
If I sleep too late I'm sorry,
Just reheat my carnivorous lunch!

Jolly Man singing the local ditty,
Cheeseburgers encompassing our dirty table,
Stir it up girls looking very pretty,
Drink a lot, smoke a lot, leave very unable!

Palm trees, coconuts, trade winds,
Paradise flowing all around,
The mainland's problems are on amends,
Just loose yourself in the Caribbean sound!


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Meridian ( -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 04:10 pm

Like the comercial

After reading the last line, I think I know what your poem is about... Just have a good time, and enjoy yourself... I meant, lose yourself! It's just like that Carribean commercial! Very well written! Great Job SRC!
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