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You Kids Are Growing Up Too Fast
21 July, 2003
Author: Ben Laney

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You kids are growing too fast for me
I wish I could stop the time
Every time I look around and see
I see another year has flown by
Kite strings and rainbow dreams
Little feet running in the sand
Come here, be near to me
Don't go slipping through my hands

You kids are growing too fast for me
Nothing ever slows you down
Pretty soon you'll spread your wings
And fly to some brand new ground
Crayons, they're all gone
Along with Big Chief drawing pads
And though I know you must fly on
Still it makes me a little sad

You kids are growing too fast for me
I want you to quit, quit right now
Freeze for a moment and let me be
In your lives longer somehow
All too soon you jump the moon
On your way to reach out for your star
But won't you save Dad some room
While you're still the children you are

You kids are growing too fast for me
Nothing ever slows you down
You kids are growing too fast for me
I want you too quit, quit right now

------- Author's Notes -------

Whether or not you blink your eyes you just can't stop the passing of time. Maybe if I hadn't given them so much water, this wouldn't have happened! (Not to mention the tons of food.) QUIT RIGHT NOW!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Dino (67.26.92.212) -- Friday, July 25 2003, 03:46 am

Your 're right Ben!

Yes, our kids do grow up too fast. Even the grandkids. Nice to read your special poem about (you kids). Must of been something in the water? Miracle grow? Thanks for sharing Ben.
Ben (67.123.244.245) -- Friday, July 25 2003, 04:56 am

Thanks,Dino.......

I am glad you liked this poem, Dino. Miracle grow!! It never occurred to me! That's it! those rascals all got into the MIRACLE GROW!!! We've got to warn the other parents! Ha! Ha! Thanks, Dino!!
Leah (142.59.104.228) -- Friday, September 19 2003, 08:28 am

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yeah they do my sis says she cant even remember her youngest being a baby....my nephew hes already 10 and me b 4 I know it I'm gonna be gone I'm living my life right now at this very moment its passing me by...
Dylan (204.189.14.7) -- Wednesday, November 26 2003, 11:47 pm

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Dad, I'll gladly quit getting old if you do! Ha ha ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
jamie (67.68.236.226) -- Sunday, February 29 2004, 02:54 am

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gosh kids are gonna grow up, parents have to understand that!! they have to stop trying to live through their kids...thats whats driving them away!
Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 07:35 pm

Dylan, I must inform you, girl, that.....

Dylan, I must inform you, girl, that I am NOT getting old, and I am not growing up, no way, no how! Just because you are, it doesn't mean I have to. Thank you, though, for your comment on this one. I am glad it made you laugh. Love, Dad
Ben Laney (68.127.169.72) -- Monday, August 23 2004, 07:40 pm

jamie, thank you for sharing your..

jamie, thank you for sharing your point of view, I do appreciate what you're saying and I agree. No parent should try to live through their kids. Parents are only human too, though. Sometimes we need our kids to help raise us right! Haa! Haaaa! Kind Regards, Ben
Linda (67.125.1.68) -- Thursday, September 22 2005, 05:08 pm

When did we loose control.........

I love your poem. I tells me that letting go is not always easy.
Ben Laney (65.136.19.151) -- Thursday, September 22 2005, 09:13 pm

Linda we lose control the instant....

Linda we lose control the instant.we gain these other human beings (if you can call kids human beings) and we never regain that which was lost. So we hope, we pray and we keep on going. These kids just grow too fast for me! Thank you very much for your kind and positive words. I do appreciate them a lot!
Callie Bills (72.226.29.4) -- Thursday, April 7 2011, 08:19 pm

please

i was just wondering if i could print out ur poem to show my teacher because it inspired me to write my own poem about life
 
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