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This Sensitive Heart Of Mine Needs To Be Loved...
25 May, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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sensitive heart have I
a sensitive heart that makes me cry
a sensitive heart that longs to be touched
a sensitive heart that
has given you what you've asked for
a sensitive heart that wants to be loved like it was before
a sensitive heart that wants more
a sensitive heart that can not stop crying
a sensitive heart that gives out too much
a sensitive heart that is in love with you
a sensitive heart that got her heart broken on words that were openly never spoken..
if not you...
who will love this sensitive heart of mine
and not worry or care what the world says or thinks
my sensitive heart continues to cry as it says good-bye

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 08:24 pm

More than your eyes

Your heart is taking the role of your eyes, in that it constantly cries and cries.... Haven't found the man that can warm your heart in his blanket of love yet? You will! I know you will, I know you shall! There's no doubt in my mind! Just hurry up and find one before you turn 60! (just kidding) Very moving Terrie*!
I'm on the edge of tears....

Smiles,
Meridian
Terrie* (65.148.231.152) -- Tuesday, May 25 2004, 09:47 pm

Meri,

many of my poems were written shortly after my husband past..kinda mixing them in w/love lost and love gained..mixed emotions....i hear ya i'm darn purty close to 60 already..i wait paitiently for love again..my husband waited 7 years for me..so i can wait for love..have been there before..that love was sooo good to me..thank you for your comment..and i know the next love to appear will be the best....thanx.Terrie*
Clive (63.184.96.185) -- Wednesday, May 26 2004, 03:57 pm

Love hugs and Light

Wanting Love is no crime,
Wanting someone near is sometimes nice,
To be held in you're warmth,
As you're cuddled in mine too,
This is two hearts that rejoyce,
You'd hear them beating close,
Almost in harmony they are,
Minds now act as one,
My Tears fall just for you,
But together we know this was ment,
For you and me.

Great poem Terrie
enjoyable reading
Love hugs and light Clive
Terrie* (65.136.7.153) -- Wednesday, May 26 2004, 04:08 pm

Clive, you have a gentle soul...

what a romantic you are..with nothing to hide Oh God... i just love reading your comments it gives my heart a buzz..i'll see you in my dreams....love/hugs back at ya.
Clive (63.184.96.178) -- Thursday, May 27 2004, 02:18 am

Always will I be

In you're dreams I'll be the one who'll watch over you tight, I'll be the one to hold you safe and warm, My eyes you'll see do not lie,
My heart will beat only for one,
Joy will pass and more will come,
For tomorrow we will walk the shores of time
crystal (208.254.109.22) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 04:15 pm

terrie

wow this one really touched my heart, it brought tears to my eyes... this sensitive heart of mine can feel the pain, great poem
Martin Vann (4.244.171.45) -- Friday, May 28 2004, 07:22 pm

Love, like spring flowers, The colors Change

Terrie,

Listen to the memories, the touch of his heart, upon your breast, love like that, will never be again. No, I do not say, your heart, beats in vain, but love is like a flower in the spring, and the colors, change, but not the heart.

MartinV
Terrie* (65.136.7.23) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 02:40 am

Clive 'N Crystal

Clive,
thank you for keepin' me safe n warm when we shared our moments in our own way.

Crystal,
glad you enjoyed this sorry for the tears...
Terrie* (65.136.7.23) -- Sunday, June 13 2004, 02:52 am

Martin,

truth in your words, my memories are special to me something only i have access to..TRUE LOVE like that will never be..i feel blessed to have had a chance at real undying love as he gave me..
 
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