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The Final Chapter, Of Our Hearts
8 December, 2003
Author: ShyHeart

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So many words, she has read, my every poem, every line
To the point, somehow, she has confused, her very mind
Then, she makes a move, to find out, if my words are true,
This isn’t fair, this, isn’t fair, yet, I understand, her move

To a cliff , she takes us both, then, we both, go over it
I never knew, I had no clue, she, would make this move
Must be something special, within her heart
To make this move, yet If, I fall, she is in my heart

There is no confession, for me to make
Every word and every line,
Was written from my heart, and mine to make
Love can be a fire, and two hearts, it can take

Away, from where they were born,
If, upon the rocks, my heart,
She shatters, without intent
My heart will think of her, as its torn apart

So, many words, perhaps, too many
She read the poems, of my heart
Can it be, she now writes,
“The final chapter of our hearts.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.6.115) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 05:41 pm

Martin..

great writing...I'm spell bound over your poetry..they are always so expressive and very vivid..i'm high maintanence when it comes to poetry...J/K ...but....the best draw me in like a magnet..thanx for sharing such fine writings ..have a splendid day and Merry Christmas...Terrie*
Tricia (206.230.22.10) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 05:45 pm

awww a romeo and juliet

This poem is great it reminds me of romeo and juliet. Great poem martin. THanks for sharing
Tricia
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 09:22 pm

Martin Vann...

This is an amazingly wonderful poem! Great work! it dose kinda remind me of romeo and juliet also. Great job my friend.

Lost of love,
Leah Kendall
Silkened Moon (204.31.225.89) -- Tuesday, December 9 2003, 10:24 pm

It's like reading a LOVE STORY!

So passionate, so lovely, and from a lover's point of view! I loved it all the way to the very last line and wished it never ended! I totally embraced the ending! Sweet and Beautiful, just like a Martin Love poem Original! Keep writing Martin, your poems are truly more than words can say!
Martin V (171.75.207.235) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 10:40 pm

The Final Chapter Of Our Hearts..., Thank You

My, I'm so grateful to you all for your time given, to share my words. I have been gone for a while, but now, I thank you each, for your blessings and kind words, about my work.

MartinV
 
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