I Love The Passion, Of A Working Man
7 June, 2004
Author: ShyHeart
Did, what I was told to do, hope, the company, is statisfied
Finally, this day, races to its end, leaving me, with a question
From here, where do I go? I go back home to you, feel your love for me
Another busy day, worked hard, hope the profits, all come through
Yes, I know, money isn't everything, but today, try living without it
I'm heading home, hope, my flowers still bloom, need something
Need something beautiful and soft, you are so far away
Yet, I hear you say, take me darling, be gentle, I have felt your rage
I love the way you take away my breath, God, my heart pounds
As you enter me, your passion is so, hot I burn, deep inside
From where, you share your fire, and then, you release
So, much of you, deep inside of me, damn, I love it and you
When you have had a hard day, then come home to me
And take it out into me, God, I love, when you share, it all inside of me
Then I hear your breath and hear you say, sorry, I didn't mean, to go so deep
I say, to my heart, sweetheart, next time, go deeper if, you can
"I Love The Passion, Of A Working Man"
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| bored (66.46.230.94) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 11:22 am didn't realize this was sex site. good writing but a little to explicit. |
| barb (66.46.230.94) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 11:30 am the writing was intelligent, but the subject was to descriptive. Don't you think? Sex and Making love are two different things. They sound like the same thing here. |
| Martin Vann (4.244.87.214) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 02:53 pm I surley do not intend to offend anyone and If, I ever do, I do aplogize. Perhaps this is a bit strong, but, I'm not afraid to write how I feel, yet also realize, one should be sensitive to others and appreicate their view points, and I do. MartinV |
| mommie2bratsus (65.148.231.164) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 04:17 pm lots of beauty in your words..i appreciate this... paints a beautiful portrait,so much beauty when a man passionate/tender side shares his heart/feelings..we must respect a man that isn't afraid to share love..i appreciate life as a form of beautiful art, thank you for such breathtaking beauty. i am one of many whom appreciates what God created to share thru love.. |
| Tammy (66.38.54.201) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 06:22 pm Well I didn't take your poem the wrong way, I took it many different ways.....A mans passion comes through in everything he touches weather it be his job or his wife ect.. maybe I read it different but what I seen and read was "The Passion Of A Working Man"> A man who loves what he has at home, and they can't get enough of each others burning passion..which I find very romantic. |
| Martin Vann (4.244.87.62) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 06:37 pm Tammy, I believe, if a man has someone who loves him, then that is where his heart and passion should be. When he needs, her, when he wants her and if she loves him to, I think a man, should take his love home and tell her, now and then, with flowers or a poem, if he is honest, love will understand the passion. The meaning always, goes beyond the words. Thank You |
| Tarna (4.226.171.108) -- Tuesday, June 8 2004, 08:16 pm I feel this is a one of the most erotically beautiful poems I have read. I read it a couple times from different points of view. First I read it at face value. Then I read it as reaching deep within each others minds and souls and the out bursting of the days tensions and asking for more depth in understanding and sharing. Both ways it was an interestingly wonderful poem. I'm glad Dreamer let Martin share it here. After all we're not all kids ;) Great job Martin |
| Martin Vann (4.244.93.126) -- Wednesday, June 9 2004, 03:45 pm Tarna, I appreciate your views here and they are very astute, sex, love, passion, understanding, caring, not often, but sometimes they all come together in a flash. MartinV |
| barb (66.46.241.104) -- Friday, June 25 2004, 07:16 pm oh by the way I'm not a kid, I'm a mature prude, Tarna.The poem was to explicit for me. the writing was good. |
| d v n rao (223.177.126.222) -- Wednesday, July 24 2013, 02:56 pm Passion is expressed neatly and translated into a few word with least possible vulgarity |
| Stephen (67.181.52.82) -- Wednesday, November 13 2013, 06:47 pm Whether a miner or a salesman, you got it way right. It touch my soul! |
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