What Kept Me Didn't Exist...
I heard your plea
when you called
I tried to get to you
but due to an unknown force
to you I was unable to come
I heard your plea of pain
yet I was unable to assist
somethings one can not explain
a friendship gained doesn't
mean a friendship lost
when history has been made
I do not find one
to lose another
the tone in my voice
as you've never heard it before
told you something was up
I never was one to lie
and you know me for that
so can we just go on
and pretend that whatever kept me didn't exist
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Meridian (18.104.22.168) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 04:46 pm|
Such pain I feel in your poem Terrie*! the depth you've created in your stanzas..... Maybe it did exist, maybe you just have to dig deep, and see if you can find it, don't lose hope my friend... Keep on pressing toward the mark!
|Meridian (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, June 17 2004, 04:48 pm|
Hey Terrie*! Your poem was good, I didn't say so, in the first paragraph, it's a possiblity that you can leave out something..... LOL!
|Terrie* (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, June 18 2004, 01:27 am|
yea such confusing words i display...do i not? thanks for another pleasing comment..
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