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How Do I Tell Her, That I Love Her?
19 June, 2004
Author: ShyHeart

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I want to tell her, that, I love her, but I want my words to sparkle
How do I tell her, in a special way, can’t seem to find the words
So, Lord, I kneel down, ask you for your help, how, can I make
My words of love sparkle, need your help. Lord, tell me what to say

It is quiet, then, I hear this voice…, So, you want your love to sparkle?
I have already done that, I gave you a heart, like I gave the Stars
To the moon, you have seen them, do they not sparkle? Here are
My words to you, no need, to dress up your heart, truth, will sparkle

You spend your time in vain, trying to hear, what your heart, has to say
Then out of wisdom, you ask me for my help. To speak of love, in
A special way. My son, love is always, special, and its easy to say
No words of love, can be wrapped, as I do the moon, and milky way

Look up at me, as I speak to you, tell me, what does not sparkle?
You call on me, ask how can you say to her, what is in your heart
You ask me for something special, yet, I show you, every day and night
My moon is made of love, as my stars, light up its smile, its so simple

Three words I share with you my son, and if, your heart is true
These three words, are all she needs to hear, no flowers, or glitter
Already, I have shared those with you, look up at me, you want to sparkle?
Three words, I give to you, just tell her…

“I Love You.”

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 04:12 am

three words

Hey Martin! In my brief comment, I just wanna say, "I love you" says a lot when it's from the heart.... It doesn't mean much, if you're only doing it to please her, or doing because that's what she wants to hear, but when those three words actually mean something, they touch a person's heart..... Once again, very good poetic ability Martin!

Smiles,
Meridian
barb (209.112.24.208) -- Monday, June 21 2004, 03:22 pm

very nice

yea Mmeridan is right if you tuly mean those words, it's a beautiful thing. Not lust her but truly love her. then tell her. you'll know one way or another how she feels.i 'm the type that isn't good at holding things in, so if I'm going to get hurt, then do it fast so I can heal.
mommie2bratsus (65.148.213.116) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 02:23 am

M.Vann,

taking the time to express love...with saying
I LOVE YOU....
those three words express sincere love even from far away in the biggest way..this is heartfelt and touching can't help release a tear as i read this. she definently knows that you are sincere in your love...
Emilee (12.223.196.102) -- Tuesday, June 22 2004, 09:44 pm

awesome

o thats o cool, and so true! just a simple "i love you" can sparkle like nothing else! and isnt God awesome for showing us that!? good job! God Bless~EMILEE
Terrie* (66.81.137.233) -- Saturday, June 24 2006, 12:04 am

Ditto...

no more needs to be said....
 
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