I 'll Give You The Best Of Me
28 June, 2004
Author: SweetVenom
I like to watch you sleep,
With my hands over you,
Stroking you to slumber,
I like to watch you this way.
Your innocent face,
brings in a peace within me,
Your soft snuggle in this state,
wants me to make you more at ease.
Your trust for me,
has made me live for you,
All this makes me love you more,
And give you the best of me.
Early in the morning,
As you wake me up,
the sparkle in your eyes,
makes my day come alive,
The love you have for me,
Makes me give you everything,
I have in this world.
And I will surely give you,
the best of me.
You don't ask me for anything,
You never complain about anything,
The way you look and take things,
Make me adore you more, And,
love you more than anything,
I will never make you sad,
I will always give you the best of me.
------- Author's Notes -------
This is the way I feel for her. I always want of give her the best of me. |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Martin Vann (63.185.81.180) -- Monday, June 28 2004, 09:25 pm Hey, sweet venom, your fangs, go deep, into her heart, yet, your bite, does not kill. For in this poem, I feel, your love for her, yet, you bite hard and try to get your fill. You and I both know It is her love, that can destroy, both of us, best, we speak, the truth now. She has weakened once before, your, charms. Yet, her, venom, still exist. Love this woman true, else you will be, a writing, upon a morticans, report. It will read, died from all his lies, don't mess, with a woman in love. MartinV |
| Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Tuesday, June 29 2004, 01:15 am this poem stands out.... When 2, touch and agree, and enjoy each other----I think it's wonderful SweetVenom.... Lovely word usage! <snip> Smiles, Meridian |
| Terrie* (65.148.200.5) -- Tuesday, June 29 2004, 03:12 am i found this deeply touching, absolutely beautiful.. thats all we ever think of giving when we love someone..giving them our best..this poem made me think of the man that i love.. God knows i want to give him the best of me...hugs/love |
| SweetVenom (192.168.62.50) -- Tuesday, June 29 2004, 04:24 am Thanks a lot to all of you. And extra thanks to Martin for his warning! :-). I will never play with people's heart neither will I ever test them with half filled love. Whatever I give, it will be to the brim. |
| drk (192.168.61.156) -- Tuesday, June 29 2004, 04:26 am This is givng some deep thought when we come across each line. good and touching lines. |
| MatrixReloader (202.4.189.114) -- Tuesday, June 29 2004, 04:50 am Able to feel the poetic dreams... Wish him if he can make it happen in reality... :P |
| barb (206.191.91.48) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 12:03 am This poem to me is so calming, the warmth and sincerety is so nice to me love is wanting to be your best. you are definitly in love not lust. Nice writing of feelings. |
| Arun (192.168.58.74) -- Wednesday, July 21 2004, 01:24 pm Sppechless!excellento |
| sreenesh (203.76.129.202) -- Monday, April 3 2006, 07:04 am no words to say... |
| Terrie* (66.81.139.80) -- Sunday, June 25 2006, 12:24 am Hi Sweet, came back to touch the words of a heart,that touched mine not as a poet but as a friend, and after readin' M.V's comment ,i only hope others take the sound advice, as a woman let it be known, we DO give the best and nothin' less and it is true we only want the best of our hearts other half... |
| Sweetvenom (47.251.0.12) -- Monday, June 26 2006, 09:19 am Thanks a lot, friend.Was wondering where you had been.No submissions,no comments for a long time.Good to see ya back :) |
| Terrie* (66.81.138.98) -- Monday, June 26 2006, 06:21 pm my only regret was leavin' , feels good to be home where my "Friends" are so supportive in everywhich way, love your poetry !thanx A-gain ! |
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