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Can't Seem To Get You Off Of My Mind..
6 July, 2004
Author: Terrie*

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can't seem to get you off my mind
but..
that’s fine cause all thoughts are kind
we found comfort in each others emrace
all I see are the fond memories in this place
when I'm on the beach taking a stroll
I see the many visions of us take control

I see us chatting
while holding one another so close
I feel your lips on my neck
as you slowly race down to my breasts

your hands on my waist as you pull me closer in
I feel your fingers massaging my shoulders
as I close my eyes and lay on my back
our clothes start coming off...

at that moment tears appear in my eyes
as I remember those memories
when you were alive....

------- Author's Notes -------

First loves are so hard to forget... even after 13 years.. how i miss him soo...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (152.163.253.8) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 10:22 pm

missing a loved one

I can't say I know how you feel, because I've never been married, plus, I'm too young... But, the way you express your pain through your deep, profound poetry, how bad you feel, after his loss... I can say, though, I've loss quite a few loved ones, and sometimes the sorrow, is so great, I can't even think straight... But, I've learned to take each step, one day at a time... and that's how I recuperate; at least I try to anyway....*tear* Thanks for sharing Miss T! Smiles, Meridian
Terrie* (65.54.98.161) -- Monday, July 5 2004, 10:29 pm

Meri,

thank you my friend..yea i guess still miss my first and last love..the father of my kids .and yes after 13 years God blessed me and placed someone new in my life and he totally understands how/why i miss my first..oh God ..I LOVE this man for bein' so understandin'.. he too keeps me schmilin'..
Clive (63.184.0.58) -- Tuesday, July 6 2004, 08:52 pm

first

My first love I have now found, My first love was no where to be found, Then a letter we wrote, Understood each other more, I had found my first love in her,
Terrie* (65.148.207.26) -- Wednesday, July 7 2004, 03:54 am

Clive, i love to read you..

your comments like your poetry are so one of a kind kinda like a first love your many comments make me smile so warmly... thanx for keepin' my heart on fire...
 
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