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When You Left Me Here...
Author: WilTheThrill

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When you left me sitting here,
a part of me died.
Gone in a swift rush,
was all my confidence and pride.
My good times went,
down a road roughly.
All that happiness and joy,
stopped sudden and ubruptly.
I sat and thought,
of all the good times,
and i couldn't stop putting,
my emotions into rhymes.
These poems help me,
to get through this mess,
and to help notice,
that i am truly blessed.
For my day will come,
when i find that one girl,
and i will once again,
be lost in an enchanting swirl.

------- Author's Notes -------

its about my ex. she broke up with me over and email and it said that she never really liked me, she just liked telling people she had a boyfriend.

pretty crummy huh?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.116.200) -- Friday, July 16 2004, 07:01 pm

I'm sorry

WilTheThrill, you must've been real upset, when you got the e-mail from her.... Maybe she did have feelings for you, but just said that since the breakup... The world may never know... But, I'm sorry about what happen, and the day will come when you'll be blessed with a girl that will make your heart sing a few tunes!

Take care Wil!
Smiles,
Meridian
Terrie* (65.148.209.165) -- Saturday, July 17 2004, 09:27 pm

Wil , your reward will come flowing through...

brokenhearts can be devastating..i know that someone meant for you will shine through from heaven. TRUE LOVE never breaks hearts..soon like myself you will be writing about the effect that love has on your heart...i love all of your postings..great job...hugs/love
Ben Franklin (80.6.138.109) -- Sunday, July 18 2004, 07:52 pm

move on

I know its hard to do,belive me i know,but if you step out of the picture and look at the way she ended it with you you, will see that she is a coward,and she never deserved you,a year ago my girlfriend dumped me over a text message!nice a!
great poem mate!!
Hushy
 
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