Take My Rose ..petal By Petal..
23 July, 2004
Author: Terrie*
two hearts two souls
becoming just one
two hearts two souls
breathe and beat as one
two hearts two loves
unite into one
two hearts two lives
that’s you and I
the feelings the touch
to me you mean so much
a chance for romance
our love so strong
taking us where we belong
one touch one kiss
soon a dream will no longer be
it will be a real you and me
to hold you, to love you
to kiss you ,to make endless love
patience paid off
my blessing i will redeem
the moon and the stars will witness
love beyond extremes
oh how the angels and I prayed for this day
to be held in your arms
so you can carry me away..
no love is as strong as the one
between you and I
please forgive me if I cry
I waited patiently
for someone like you
to come into the second part of my life
petal by petal
i expose who i am
petal by petal
my innocense dissapears
as you touch every part
of my rose so deep
petal by petal
i give you what is now in your hands
take me slow , take me soft
take me all
come in deep into my rose...
take all that i offer into your life...
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Martin Vanv (63.185.80.210) -- Friday, July 23 2004, 09:36 pm Terrie, This poem, means so much to me, please forgive, theses words I share about your poem, nothing, personal, ment, just love your poem. Every Rose, has its thorns, sometimes, stiff and hard, sometimes, more painfull, like a memory. Yet, as long as the Sun will shine, and nurishment is given, to its root, the Rose will bloom. when it does, it cares not about yesterday, today is its life. It's petals, reach out for the sun, soak up the love, of the morning dew. Should, another winter come, and send this Rose, into a deep sleep, somehow I know, the Sun will wake her up and she will bloom with, Petals, thatt cover the entire world, her fragrance, comes from all the Roses before her, and all the love, that, has come and gone, time, will, have its way. I see the Rose, of your heart, and I pray each day, Lord, give me the power of a Sun-Ray, to warm this Rose, before time, takes, us both away. -Martin V |
| Meridian (64.12.116.200) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 01:02 am These words are deep down to the marrow in my bones.... This is really magical, and breathtaking! It doesn't take a rocket scientist, nor a magnifying glass to see how much love sets you on a pedestal! Real good job with writing this extravangant poem! Smiles my friend, Meridian |
| Terrie* (65.148.210.224) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 05:53 am guess my words are extremely deep (HOT), no trouble finding me among a crowd. i will always be thanking God w/smiles that illuminate in every ocean and radiates beyond the heavens , recharging the stars and the moon and he and i only know why..i think.. |
| Jeremy Morzos (150.182.179.81) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 07:05 pm This is just absolutely plain beautiful!!! |
| Terrie* (65.148.215.136) -- Sunday, July 25 2004, 07:33 pm thank you for understanding and seeing the natural beauty in it, your comment put me up one more notch on my cushiony pedastal.. hugs/love |
| Paul (66.139.187.25) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 06:28 pm When I read this poem I feel as if you have a deep need / desire I can feel the passion and fire, good poem |
| Terrie* (65.148.213.43) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 07:37 pm does go deep ..i am touched that you were able to feel the passion/fire in the love that i carry/release all of the time from within my heart...LOVE isn't it a beautiful thing to experience and be a part of? |
| Terrie* (65.147.241.55) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 08:28 pm your comment means the world to me ,as i watch you peel back each layer to reveal who i am, an emryo ,a lonely heart..that awaits and accepts one mans heart/love to enter... |
| Martin Vann (63.185.65.6) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 10:19 pm Terrie,As poets, often do, their pens are a reflection, of what, is in their hearts, The same is true, when a poet writes, based, on memories. Memories, come back, to us all, some cry, some just remember, yet, some hearts, like God's, who gave to you your first love, you don't forget, his gift Yes you cry, for all the love that has been taken away, We all feel your tears and pain, poets, who are true, to the pen and heart, we understand, what your heart, is going through. Yes, as other poets do, I'm so, much in love with you, my eyes, God, how, they cry. No, not out of pity, for a love gone, called away, but, more for, the love, you have shared with us. God was the one, who showed us all, how to love.We all thank you, for your heart's pen. -MV |
| Terrie* (65.148.232.176) -- Wednesday, July 28 2004, 10:31 pm yes my words i share w/you all ..i made a wrong decision and sent true love away...one that was willing to share the world w/me..and share me with the world..i still have time maybe i'll still have a chance over dinner w/him tonight. |
| Martin Vann (63.185.64.40) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 05:39 pm Terrie, I hope your dinner, love afair, went well for you and him, perhaps, two hearts, shared more truth than ever before, and left the passion, outside, the restaurant door. If, you found, what your heart was looking for, God Bless you, if, not, there is I'm sure, someone waiting outside that restaurant door, with, lonely, tears, in his eyes, and all he has, is to share his lonely tears, with, his heart, as both wait, for you, to come out, the front door. Do you come out, with his arm around you, are do you come out that front door, realizing, your, heart needs more, then dinner, and candle light. Definitely, a poem, written by a heart, passion, left aside. -MV |
| Terrie* (65.150.174.159) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 01:49 am the light is the man in my life..complicated as my life is right now,perhaps a bit different than most , i made a decision to meet an old flame for dinner on a whim as he needed me at his side,his best friend had just died. i e-mailed my true love for he lives so far away to tell him of my plans.. i share everything w/him (perhaps too much of me sometimes but i love this man) i felt in this rash decision i may have severed our love, i didn't get an immediate response..i read more than my female mind should have.. we are fine .( he is the strong one that holds us together as we start our lives as one)he is WISE he totally understands and trusts my heart and knows that all i have including my love belong only to him..Easy to see why i love this Man of mine..only tears were from my heart for having such love from a holy man..can you feel MY LOVE?..that i have for HIM? |
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