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I Never Want To Feel Like Did That Day
Author: WilTheThrill

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The day it happened,
was horrible for me,
as matter of fact,
take death and times it by 3,
then you'll know how it felt,
to lose you in such a horrible way,
if i have only 1 wish its that,
i never want to feel like did that day,
but ive picked myself up,
and tried to move on,
all my feelings for you,
are swept up and gone,
or at least i thought,
but i still think of you,
and in my heart one thing remains,
im not sure if i want someone new.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.136.6.51) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 02:58 pm

Wil i know just how you feel....

after 13 years of being single..i still miss my man..i do not think that i will ever get over losing him.one never really forgets about that special love..this is a good read..your heart keeps your thoughts company on the good times..never forget..the memories
Meridian (149.174.164.71) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 05:14 pm

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Yeah, I had real close uncle who died around 2000 due to a heart attack... He had one, like 2 or 3 year earlier.... But the second one was fatal, and it seemed like I would never get myself together for a long time.... Death hits people in different ways.... Some take a while to move on, and others can move on in a matter of days.... And sometimes I wonder how do they do it.... But, I guess it's their faith.... Nice poem, real good dedication! If only we could turn back the hands of time, and revisit those years when they were alive.... Take care! And be encouraged! Smiles, Meri
Martin Vann (63.185.64.40) -- Thursday, July 29 2004, 05:28 pm

If, you love someone, thenlove, is never gone

WTT, If, you, really, gave your heart to someone, death, as we humans understand it, will, never take that love away. Hey, WTT, I don't know, if waht you say, is real, but I do know, death is not an end, but, a begininig, if, you, really sheared love, that love is still there, I call this, a matter of your heart. No, I do not cry, I have known love, called away from me and if, this, is what, your are writing about, don't woory, God gave us a world full of love, the rest is up to you. Love, doesn't care who you love, it only cares, that you DO love, take care. Your poem, is beyond, all its words, and I thank You. -MV
Wil (162.39.235.140) -- Friday, July 30 2004, 05:01 am

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I really hate for all these nice things your saying but its not about death its about a break up.. :|
 
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