Oh Cruel World
Author: Brandon Lingenfelker


life is cruel. it takes u in whole with high hopes and proud dreams. pulls u into it full force. gets u right to the edge and spits u back to where u started...Oh cruel world y ..y am i here..y are u so cruel..y is it that all things created by u are also detroyed by u ..u feel no remorse and have no soul....

pulled into the flames burnt and burnt. again lives taken by u and still u do not change. we try to change u for the better but u seem so turn for the worse. work with us. we plea but u simply resist and again feel no remorse..take me now. take me into your arms cruel world hold me tight and dont let me go. alone i can not stand and alone i will not even try.....

twists and turns no corner left unlooked upon. no way out no way in trapped until we meet our dooms. created by an uncontrolable force that will in the end destroy us all and remake us just to destroy us again. u toy with our mind, toy with our hopes, toy with our emotions. we can not even put up a fight and that is how u like it. Oh cruel world u have gotten to me for the last time. it is now finished.

i will take up force and rebel against u. take matters into my own hands, show u that we can fight back, show u that u dont have complete control over our destinies. i step out alone or at lest so it seems. i fall to my knees and have a friend there to pick me back up to hold me up high to walk with forever. Oh cruel world have no idea the shame u have caused and no idea the pain u will feel.......


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