I Hate The Feeling
Author: BrianV


As the phone goes down
I hate the feeling
of connection

As I lie in bed
I hate the feeling
of my love

As I wake to morning
I hate the feeling
Of hugs
Not given.

As I walk to work
I hate the feeling
Of hands
Not holding.

As I eat each meal
I hate the feeling
Of days
Not shared.

In all I do
I hate the feeling
Of not being
With you.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* ( -- Friday, August 20 2004, 03:55 am

Brian V,i know the feeling too well..

my patience seems to have blown to zero tolerence..yet i still never be separated from my precious love...whom infected my heart with his love..i know the feeling you paint have a beautiful/romantic way of expressing to touch your readers...keep sharing i enjoy feeling your poetry...
brandy ( -- Tuesday, August 31 2004, 02:53 am


this poem is really good
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