Give Me Your Hand...close Your Eyes...
25 August, 2004
Author: Terrie*
Give me your hand
Close your eyes,
take a deep breath ..
now let it out...
read between the lines..
yes i still do...
very much..
LOVE is what you are all about...
you are very special to me..
when you hurt..
i hurt twice as much..
when you love
I love that much more
when you hug
I'm right there hugging you
when your happy
I'm happy for you
when you want
I want you just as much
when you cry
I cry right besides you
when your gone
I no longer exist
when you die
I die along with you...
------- Author's Notes -------
He means so much to me... |
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| joyce (68.222.111.123) -- Thursday, August 26 2004, 12:17 pm terrie this is very pretty |
| Martin Vann (63.185.65.36) -- Thursday, August 26 2004, 07:45 pm Terrie, Give me your heart, now, close your eyes and feel my soul around you, loving, and touching you. Now, open up your eyes, no, this was not a dream, you just let your heart, play with reality! Feel my lips, feel my arms. I know, they make it hard for you to breath, sorry, darlin, that is what love can do. You can't breath for yourself, your life belongs to someone else, as he holds, you in his arms, its so hard to take a breath yet, it is has been so long, since, love has refreshed your heart, you will be just, fine, its just, been such a long time, since you felt the arms of love, and I pray, they reach you, as love, tries to do. MV |
| Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 09:03 am A very heart felt poem. When we love someone we do feel all their emotions. A lovely read |
| Sweetvenom (192.168.48.139) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 02:02 pm You have really expressed the love in such short sentences. Its short and sweet and can drive anyone crazy!!It happens only when you are in love! |
| Terrie* (65.150.167.142) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 06:29 pm for you lovely comment.. |
| Terrie* (65.150.167.142) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 06:37 pm I see hope in my dreams LOVE i feel in my heart YOU touched my soul with your heavenly words Yesterday , i breathed for only me, TODAY ,TOMMOROW and ALWAYS we breath for each other... |
| Terrie* (65.150.167.142) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 06:44 pm when love penetrates deep in the heart..you got it ..it can definently drive one Karazee...especially when you feel it's worth throughout your veins as you take in a deep cleansing breath.....can you feel it too? AWESOME HUH? |
| Martin Vann (63.185.80.124) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 07:46 pm Terrie, I have no more to say, then, there is no touch, as soft as love, may it be it front of you or s thousand miles away..., There is no touch, as soft as love. MV |
| Terrie* (65.148.232.188) -- Friday, August 27 2004, 08:51 pm ditto... |
| Tenzin yeshi (99.244.209.101) -- Friday, September 25 2009, 04:31 am I was new at love, i have no idea what to do,but all i think of is you, i love you bcoz you are you |
| melanie (91.106.163.64) -- Friday, November 13 2009, 11:15 pm what fabulous words |
| what a love (81.132.230.163) -- Tuesday, March 29 2011, 09:04 pm the night is dark, thunder and rain, you came in my dream , AGAIN AGAIN, no star in the sky, no friend to talk, I think in my life there is no luck, waiting for your letter, waiting for your phone, you don't know dear how much, I weep alone , |
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